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Attic Space

Saturday, October 29, 2005

Mind, body, soul. Attic Space and Ghost dreams. A pronouncement of love.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3003    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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506 words of metaphor and similie and something in between.

A Rayne Vignette.

"You got to be a Spirit... Can't be no ghost."

She was a girl. And crazy too. Pretty, dark eyed and shaggy haired, but he can't figure out if she's real or not. She's the pale flitting through his dreams, his life, without a rhyme or a reason. Without one thought as to what she does to him.

And sometimes, when he touches her, he expects to feel nothing, except his fingers going through her because she's simply not there. She simply vanishes, not from the ship but from all sense of reality. Else, she haunts him with her empty eyes, always searching for something he can neither see nor hear. Sometimes the weariness on her face scares him, because she's beautiful even though she suffers endless pain.

He ain't so bright, but he's not stupid either, rough around the edges and he knows if he gives in, he'll tear her like butterfly wings. Only not so poetic, cause he don' know how to talk like that. He can talk shell casings and knife edges, he can talk bout whore houses and whisky, things that he knows she doesn't...that she shouldn't know about, anyhow. Leastwise not rightly so, and he knows there are some who would kill him to keep it that way, others who would disagree. She gets to him in the worst of places and the worst of ways, like smoke through a keyhole. A cool breath against the small hairs at the base of his neck.

She makes him feel cheap. And dirty.

And for whatever reason, he loves her for it.

~*~

"But a ghost she is, caught only in brief glimpses of moving shadow, a whisper of cloth and thin echos of bare feet against silent steel. Hardly even a disturbance of air that left impressions against the imagination."

His house is old, old enough for its bones to creak and sway in high winds. In certain light, it was only a slightly larger than normal house. Nothing in particular special about it, a wind porch, halting gardens. A mantel that collected dust on forgotten photographs, a kitc

Comments
Saturday, 29 October 2005 15:57
You wrote fic and didn't tell me!?

I love. Of course, I pretend not to, cause it's Rayne. And in my head, they love each other 'cause they've become family, not nothing romantic about it.

*grin* Your words always find a way of stirring emotions I'd rather leave just where they were. Beautiful.
Saturday, 29 October 2005 17:00
Really well written and lyrical. Shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
CUB
Saturday, 29 October 2005 19:34
Ahh. That's the stuff.
BELLONA
Saturday, 29 October 2005 21:09
sweet, dude (read that any way you like)

b
Saturday, 29 October 2005 21:22
*Spreading the love for the Rayne*

Kinda spooky too.

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