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Dust to Dust

Monday, September 5, 2005

Newst Friday Challenge: The Theme of Earth, Mal's funeral through the Eyes of Book. Hope you enjoy.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2364    RATING: 8.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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"In sure and certain hope of the resurrection to eternal life through our Lord, we commend to Almighty God our brother, Captain Malcom Reynolds; and we commit his body to the ground: earth to earth; ashes to ashes, dust to dust. The Lord bless him and keep him, the Lord make his face to shine upon him and be gracious unto him, and give him peace. Amen."

Book closed his bible and tucked it close to his chest as for a moment he looked down, dry eyed and solemn, upon the closed casket. Then, through the fringe of his lashes, his gaze passed over every face in the too small mass gathered around, those tired and weary faces, each carrying their own memory and pain and something he knew he couldn't touch. His eyes lingered on the man in the blue body armor, staunchly refusing to take off his vac. helmet.

"If anyone wishes to speak a few words..."

He let the thought hang half spoken in the cool air of a fine Persephone evening.

It was a surprise when the first person to take up his invitation was not Inara, veiled in black like some mysterious Madonna, silent and slender a silhouette. Though there were no flowers here at the graveside, there was the Ambassador.

Nor was it stoic Zoe, who stood at attention as if with her rigidness she could stand tall for her closest friend as well as herself, defiant for him even now.

No, it was Wash who let his wife go and came forward only to rest beside Book.

"Malcolm Reynolds was... was a singular man. Without him, I don't know what my life would be like only that it would be empty. I wouldn't have married Zoe, I wouldn't have had this family of ours, and I would never have met Serenity. Whereever he's gone, I hope it's something like home."

Wash raised his hand to rub the back of his neck. Sheepishly, he returned to his wife. She glanced to the man in blue and her jaw tightened subtley.

Beside them, River rested her head on Simon's shoulder, and he kept one arm wrapped around her waist but Book didn't miss the fingers tangled with Kaylee's. She reached

Comments
Monday, 05 September 2005 19:55
Oh man, that killed me. *sniff* Especially Jayne, all near tears. And Wash... I could so picture every second of that. And then Mal pops up out of the ground, how perfectly like something they'd do to thwart Niska. I loved it.
Monday, 05 September 2005 20:08
Ty, ty Rinny <g> I'm glad you like it. If it wasn't obvious, I'm absolutely in love with the character and the way Adam plays him.

As for the story, I was complaining to the husband about not knowing what to do for the challenge, and so I blame the entire plot on him.

And soon, I might be blaming you. Your art is inspirational, lol

~Taen
Monday, 05 September 2005 22:14
Brilliant! When I first saw the opening lines I was prepared to hate this fic, not wanting the Captain to be dead and all but loved how they thwarted Niska by faking his death. Have to wonder what they put in that gorram coffin, hopefully something so badly burnt or vaporised that Niska won't be able to do any DNA tests on it and realise he has been had. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 06 September 2005 00:22
For just a second there I thought this had taken a right turn into the Buffyverse. Vampire Mal...

Shudder to think.

Great piece.
BELLONA
Tuesday, 06 September 2005 10:49
xie xie ni...i almost cried when i thought mal was dead, but i couldn't cause i'm in french right now, though i did squeak loudly when mal popped up!!! good fic
Tuesday, 11 October 2005 02:57
You did good work--all of them grieving right along with me as I kept wanting to stop reading since I'm hardly in the mood for Mal to be dead. Quite a nice surprise, the capn's hand rising from his dirt nap. Lovely, lovely. I thank your husband and the artist for your inspiration. Got more to say on further adventures after this? Keep 'em coming, I pray.
-Roving Eye

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