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Mood to Burn Bridges

Friday, January 10, 2003

Mal's original edict on shipboard romances

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 6566    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Note: Hi y'all. Hung up on the ratings issue again. Hope no one is offended. The title is partly in reference to the story, partly in reference to the album I listened to over and over while writing: "Furnace Room Lullaby" by Neko Case and Her Boyfriends. The song "Mood to Burn Bridges" is so great. I started out thinking of it as a "Jayne" song, but it seems to work here, too. Okay, it's mostly a Jayne song but the first couple verses really work. I know that that's going a little meta. I have no good excuse.

Disclaimer: These characters belong to Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, and 20th Century Fox or whatever.

Rallying cry: I post this as we learn that UPN doesn't want browncoats. Just wanted to say It's Always Darkest Just Before Dawn. No power in the 'verse can stop us.

Mood to Burn Bridges

“Zoë, you down there?” Mal hollered down the hatch into Zoë ’s bunk.

“Yes, Sir.” She raised one eyebrow. A delicate gesture, balletic even. Wash, on the other side of the room, leaning against her desk, his arms crossed, savored it. They hadn’t precisely been hiding their new romance but hadn’t flaunted it either. He distinctly thought that the next few minutes would be awkward. Would Mal climb down, talk to Zoë and not even notice him? He wasn’t hidden, but from the ladder, Mal would have to turn a good distance around. And what if he did notice him?

Wash was genuinely in her bunk to bed her. The rest of the crew was asleep and his desire for her had only made the day go maddeningly slowly. All day, he had thought of nothing but her skin and smell and heat. Still, he could think of at least ten reasons he could be here this late at night. They were both fully dressed. The lights were on, the bed was made. He could be chatting her up about engine efficiency or the duty rotation.

But he had a vague suspicion that Mal was onto him. There had been the near-incident a couple weeks after he’d first signed on. On an otherwise quiet

Comments
LJC
Friday, 10 January 2003 04:27
Enjoyed this tremendously--you writ great Wash, and I could totally hear Mal as well. Excellent job!
Saturday, 11 January 2003 22:10
You're my hero. I hope you write still more Wash and Zoe stories!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 January 2003 21:28
This was great! And Neko Case rocks!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 13 January 2003 00:22
Too short :-) Great Zoe and Wash!
Monday, 13 January 2003 18:35
Contingency plan -- that was SWEET!
Tuesday, 14 January 2003 04:12
Ooh, Wash and Zoe. Shiny writin'. Great characterzation.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 15 January 2003 00:31
shiny! I too love "contingency plan". AND i love that Zoe and Mal aren't goin' at it . . . unco shiny. keep it up.
--webster (disgruntledshortperson@yahoo.com)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 26 January 2003 06:14
Great Wash and Zoe Story!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 06 February 2003 09:57
You do rock at this, ya gotta know that right?! OK well lemme be the first to tell you then. I love me some Wash and Zoe, thank you for delivering some quality goods!
Mal was so authentic in this, you write the characters well! (Loving me some Jayne as well)
Wednesday, 12 February 2003 19:09
Wow, very good. Wash and Zoe was such a great romance . . . you do it credit.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 21 December 2003 05:02
Amazing story. Loved Mal's line "I named her Serenity" and Jayne's "We split his pay, right?(if we kill Wash)" You write these characters perfectly. Keep sending in fanfics!
Tuesday, 26 October 2004 19:52
What a wonderful story! Best Zoe and Wash I've read yet!

Great...everything.

Oh, how I love those two.
Friday, 03 December 2004 10:26
Sometimes the thug in Jayne damn near drives me to tears. Wash putting the scare into Mal was an excellent way to show up the Cap.

Good stuff,

Keep flyin'

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