Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Natural Talent

Sunday, March 23, 2003

Kaylee and Wash? It could have happened, but it didn't.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 8813    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Firefly belongs to people not me. Intended for fun, not profit.

Note: This is the long awaited and hardly anticipated piece of le-se. I shouldn't say that, should I?

Thanks: To LostAngel and Philomel for good, if dueling, betas.

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Natural Talent

Mal walked down Serenity’s corridor enjoying the small noise his boots made on the grating. When he stopped, he could feel the ship thrum up his legs, vibrating at the same speed as his body. He and his ship were in tune. His ship. The feeling was still new and wonderful. Having Serenity didn’t make his life any less difficult, but always knowing where his home was did. Knowing that he would be with Serenity in good times and in bad made the uncertainty okay. Hell, some days the uncertainty was a thrill.

The crew was coming together nicely. Having Zoë at hand was a comfort, a comfort the way having oxygen in the atmo was good. Things had locked into place when he signed the new mechanic on. And speaking of Kaylee, he thought, he found himself staring into the engine room at the working heart of his ship and soul and four pairs of feet. He pushed from his mind a memory of the last time he’d seen that.

“Kaylee?”

“Captain!” Her voice was pleasantly muffled. There was a clang and all four feet jumped in time, at one point crossing over each other in a tangle of boots. Mal heard metallic laughter.

“What that about in there, Kaylee?”

“Hold this,” Wash chuckled as his hand shot out from under the engine. Mal walked to them and squatted down a safe distance from their feet. He took the part, a snaking ceramic tube and looked at it blankly.

“What’re you doin’ under there, Wash?” Mal’s voice was edgy and accusatory.

Kaylee wiggled her way out.

“He’s helping, Captain.” She brushed her hair out of her eyes.

“There’s the problem!” Wash practically shouted.

Kaylee turned to his voice and the hollow ripping sound that sounded from under the engine, followed by a large chunk

Comments
Sunday, 23 March 2003 23:15
Awww... Wash is really a great guy, true to his Zoë before she was even his. You did a good job trying an angle not many people have looked at. Kaylee and Wash, very interesting. You ended it well too, I can see this actually happening and them not being weird about it later. Shiny!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 24 March 2003 01:18
So, so, so good. I was just thinking about how much I love Kaylee and Wash interaction, and I get this, which seems so real and so good. The ending is wonderful.
Monday, 24 March 2003 05:58
Shiny. I liked this a lot. Unexpected. I was a little confused a first though. I thought the ship was running smoothly through space when you talked about Mal, but then (apparently) Kaylee and Wash were working inside of the engine? I think maybe I just misread something. Regardless, it was very good.
Monday, 24 March 2003 14:45
Sigh. Thanks Sarah, I was gettin' antsy for your next piece o' work!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 24 March 2003 21:35
Lovely, Sarah! I haven't read too much from the period after Kaylee and Wash come abard, but before Wash and Zoe become a couple. Now you mention it, it makes perfect sense that Kaylee and Wash should have a few moments. Nice work!!
Monday, 24 March 2003 21:36
For some reason, the above coment was posted "anonymous." Hmm.. anyway, it's Noocyte here. Just so's you know who's praisin' you and all
Monday, 24 March 2003 22:20
bewdie! one thing i haven't lauded to you before is how very effectively you capture the characters. once again, absolutely choice!
Saturday, 27 March 2004 04:13
That was perfect; just enough tease (you're right: it could happen) but no so much that it would spoil the story of Wash hooking up w/Zoe... Now, has anyone written the fan fic of Wash hooking up w/Zoe?
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 16 September 2004 23:33
Really great character voices, and I love the choice to explore something unexpected that could've happened in canon. Very nicely done.
Friday, 03 December 2004 11:18
I love the lightness of the story, meaning you captured the Wash and Kaylee perfect. The ribbing, the funnin'...

Was easily seen.

Keep flyin'

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