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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Fifteen

Monday, October 3, 2005

Inara pursues her hobby in macroeconmics; Wash discovers the real meaning of a "mammoth dump". And someone tips off the cops . . . (WARNING: GRAPHIC EXPOSITION)

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Fifteen

Wash just stared at the beast. He’d been doing that for ten minutes, ever since he returned from paying their docking fees and buying a temporary merchant permit from the port master.

It was huge. Four tons of furry prehistoric pachyderm, its ancestors raised from extinction from the arctic steppes of Earth-That-Was in a feat of Twenty-First Century gee-whiz genetics. A lot of glacially frozen animals had been brought back, before the Exodus, as scientific curiosities or playthings for the rich. When humans abandoned Earth-That-Was they had been included in the gene bank with everything else – but this one was notable.

Tusks of pure ivory, the size of a hickory tree. A thick, wooly matte of hair that stank the way no other animal stank. Big, soulful eyes, that were nonetheless tiny in its – his, he suddenly noted as the beast turned around – face. Feet the size of fuel cells. Ears like shaggy sails. A trunk like . . . a convenient simile eluded him. There was nothing else like that in the ‘verse.

He had seen a giant sloth, once, at the Boros Metropolitan Zoological Gardens, from a hundred feet and an electric barrier away, but this was the first time that he had ever seen a mastodon. Or smelled one.

Zoe studied him as he stared, intrigued. She had rarely seen Wash pay this much attention to anything that wasn’t flight- , dinosaur- , or sex-related.

“Johnny says they raise them here,” she said, watching him with interest. “He schooled himself in them growin’ up, seein’ as how they were so important to the old country. Wuhan’s greatest export. Biggest source o’ natural ivory in the ‘verse. Whole herds of them, wrangled like sheep with horses and hovercraft out on the plains to the west. Bunch o’ Mongols and Manchus and Tibetans herd ‘em. Use ‘em as transport, construction equipment, meat, hide, everythin’. Very big in their culture. Even got a big temple to Ganesh in town.”

“That’s . . .” Wash said, at a loss for words.

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Comments
Monday, 03 October 2005 22:20
Shout outs to everyone I met at the NCBDMPP in Raleigh! All of you folks were lovely, and put up with my obnoxious habit of handing out flyers for "Kaylee's Lament"! Especial shout-outs to Ash and CallmeSerenity -- who is absolutely GORGEOUS in person! And Ash, I chatted a bit with your Dad (I think he was your dad). I'm trying to think of a way you could be more cool.

Nope. Nothing occurs.

Enjoy!

ScrewtheAlliance
Monday, 03 October 2005 22:40
...and with the return of FFF.Net, the return of a quality story.
Monday, 03 October 2005 23:42
Another fine chapter. The Jayne/Wash/Book thing was great.

易弯曲
Tuesday, 04 October 2005 03:42
Oh goody! I finally get into the site and find another chapter. Don't know how you managed to get it loaded, but thank you!

Lady Shelley
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 04 October 2005 10:07
Sobering and fascinating! Your political outline of the Firefly 'verse makes 100% sense and it's scary, in that calm, collected evil way of the world.

And as always I adore your Inara and the quandaries you settle her in.

I'm always delighted to see a new part of this story! *g*

~AR~
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 04 October 2005 17:14
Oh brilliant. I love exposition!! No, really, I do. ;) The economic and political overview was understandable, and perfectly convincing. No holes I can poke (and coming from a History major, that's high praise) I love your Jayne as well. ;)

I love this one, even better than I like Kaylee's Lament
Tuesday, 04 October 2005 19:49
You handled exposition beautifully. It's hard to keep it fascinating, but you make it look effortless.
Tuesday, 04 October 2005 23:23
You made the political dimension of the War That Was not only easy to understand but also put forward a good insight into how it will all happen again but with the balance of power shifting as pendulums do. Hmm, particularly liked how the insight affected Inara. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ZEPHOD
Wednesday, 05 October 2005 06:38
I can only echo the preceding accolades. You make it all seem so 'in the real'. If you look at other 'franchises' as some call them, Star Wars has lasted in its many incarnations for many 10's of years. Perhaps the longest running is surprisingly, Dr. Who. The Who'vians have endured black and white tv to the present day.

Wouldn't it be just grand if Firefly has that same or even greater endurance!? Your writing speaks as a voice from a far distant time. The story has already run its course, yet we are constrained to hear it linearly from your words. Our wish is for a long life for the Crew and many interesting adventures in the meantime.

Thanks! I must to bed with thoughts of the crew still in my head.
Wednesday, 05 October 2005 16:01
It was the shawl.

It was WONDERFUL to meet you, too! (And he signed my Visual Companion, everyone!)

These stories just keep getting better and better as you make the Fierfly 'verse bigger and more detailed and more real. I LOVE it. As always, I eagerly await the next chapter!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 05 October 2005 16:03
Too bad you can't edit these. I forgot the icons don't work.

That's me blushing bright red up there.

Oh, and I misspelled Firefly, very embarrassing!
Friday, 14 October 2005 21:54
terrible, absolutely terrible. imagine not bein' able t'spell Fiefly...oops!

StA,
hot damn, you done good!!! keep it up...oh wait, you already did *shame* very lazy an' bad for not readin' more

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