Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Adam's Rib Ch 10: Frying Pans and Fires.

Monday, October 3, 2005

Explosions. Kisses. Gun fire. Flirting. Talk of a mutiny. What more do you want?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4145    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: You know they're not mine, I know they're not mine. Why are we doing this?

Comments: 1) This one took longer than I'd hoped. My muses are, apparently, as stubborn if not more than I am.

2) This is the second to last chapter. The next one will be the last (well, obviously). I really hope you enjoyed it.

Feedback: Oh, but definitely. I really like it, have I told you how much? C'mon, you know you want to email me. I answer everything, in painful detail, I do. I dare you... wily_one24@yahoo.com.au

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- from the Academy detailing what was done to the children and when.

- And the in chronological order.

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"They've made contact." Dr. Miyamoto didn't wait to be asked to speak, his nervous, breathy voice broke into the room. "River Tam and two others have made it into the basement."

"Really?" Asked the man on the right.

"It doesn't change anything." Said the man on the left. "Kill them all."

"We're trying!" He pleaded to no avail. "It's not as simple as..."

His words trailed off to nothing as he stared forward, eyes wide with panic. One shake of his head and he took a step back. The two men looked at each other and then turned to see what was behind them. With a casual flick of their blue hands, they waved the doctor away, already forgotten. They both smiled.

"Jonah." Welcomed the man on the right.

"We've been waiting for you." Admonished the man on the left. "You took your time."

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They don't take him to the med lab, they take him instead up to another floor and leave him in a room. He can't find it in them before they go, they don't know why they've been asked to bring him here. It sends more than a few chills down his spine.

Jonah.

He spins around and tries to find a source for

Comments
Tuesday, 04 October 2005 18:56
don't, don't you dare stop there... get that last chapter writ, quickfast!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 04 October 2005 22:01
you better write more to this,it isn't fair to keep us waiting
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 05 October 2005 20:33
Heck, I'm just glad a certain someone is there!

GREAT story!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 23:10
I almost read the whole story in one sitting, it is THAT good!

I wasn't quite sure about the River/Kaylee pairing at first, but you really make it work.

This is so fantastic, I'm definitely going to be waiting on the edge of my seat for the story's conclusion.

Keep up the great work!!
Monday, 06 March 2006 20:13
Excellent excellent excellent!
Monday, 20 October 2008 13:30
Oh no was it Kaylee who got shot or River...i think it was kaylee poor kaylee.

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