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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Ten

Sunday, September 18, 2005

Nothin' thickens a plot like some tasty exposition!

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Ten

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The shuttle set down into the cradle with barely a thump – not the metallic clang that was often the hallmark of Mal’s flying – and after Serenity hauled it into its nest, there was the satisfying sound of the airlock hissing as it equalized pressure. Moments later the door swung open, and for the first time in nearly a week they were home again.

“Oh, I am so glad to be back,” Kaylee said joyfully as she pulled her bag (and all the other bags she had acquired) through the lock. “I’m gonna stow my junk, then check out what they’ve done to my baby.”

“You do that,” Jayne muttered, his own bag slung over his shoulder. “Me, I’m gonna get some chow.”

“Didn’t you eat before we left?” Zoe asked, incredulously. “That was a pretty shiny buffet, back there.”

“Don’t often like to eat afore I fly in atmo,” the mercenary said. “Gives me the squeesies. ’Sides, all that rich food – it stops up my plumbin’ after a while. And that makes me cranky.”

“Even as a seasoned medical professional, I’m completely disgusted by that,” Simon said, shaking his head.

“When’s Inara due back, anyway?” Kaylee asked as she started towards her bunk.

“She should be here within the hour,” Book answered, sniffing the air. “It does indeed feel good to be back here.”

“I need a vacation from my vacation,” Wash said, yawning widely. “I’m all tired out, and now I gotta go to ruttin’ work.”

“That all depends on where we’re goin’,” Zoe pointed out. “You got a notion, Captain?”

“I do,” Mal said. “Wash, you go heat up the board. I’ll discuss it when we get settled.”

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“I’m thinkin’ some grits might be good,” Jayne was saying to Zoe as they headed for the kitchen. “Grits is just the thing to—” He stopped, and sniffed. “You smell that?” he asked suspiciously.

“I surely do,” Zoe said softly. “Smells like . . .”

“Breakfast,” agreed Jayne. “But ain’t s’posed t’be no one here to make breakfast.” He drew his revolver, which he had immediately strapped on wh

Comments
Sunday, 18 September 2005 15:00
was that good an' shiny? HELL YEAH!!! dammit, wish i could write this shinily...*sighs*

b

p.s. just a coupla things i noticed (sorry, VERY bad habit of mine)

"...you’re vacation wonderland, Epiphany"

the "you're" should be a "your" in this sense

and

"What’s to garuntee that the box..."

garuntee is spelt guarantee, 'kay? other'n that, shiny as a...shiny thing
Sunday, 18 September 2005 15:30
I'm grievously, possibly homicidally, jealous of your ability to create believably twisty future history. And plot. 乌龟蛋.

Well done.

易弯曲
Sunday, 18 September 2005 16:27
After all that tasty exposition, I can see we've gotta hell of a meal headed our way!

Shiny!
Sunday, 18 September 2005 16:42
I totally dig how you work up that bit of history with Shan Yu. And the Mal-Zoe friction is new and different -- I've not seen many people write about that. Interesting to see what happens there. Another great chapter. This is shaping up to be a heckuva story.

And, of course, anytime there's a "Blue Bomber" reference, you know I love it.
Sunday, 18 September 2005 19:31
The Mal/Zoe dynamic you're exploring is refreshing - and she's not calling him "Sir." Wash is probably loving it.

And your Jayne ... great with the one-liners:

“Damn! I was just wakin’ up, too,” Jayne swore.

“What’s two percent of a treasure?”

“Two and a half shitloads,” Jayne gloated to himself. “I ain’t never had a payout that big my whole life!”

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Thanks for another great chapter.
Tuesday, 20 September 2005 22:51
Love Jayne in this and everybody's resonses to the new job is perfect. Can't wait to see what happens on Wuhan. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

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