Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Comfort 1/1

Saturday, August 27, 2005

It's hard to find a moment when your life is your job.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3707    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Wash made his way quietly through the galley looking for his wife. He had seen the Captain and Jayne skulk to their bunks several minutes ago. Zoë had yet to make an appearance. He’d heard her voice over the com, but he couldn’t relax until he laid eyes on her and seen for himself that she was alright. He made his way through the hall and down the companionway leading to the passenger lounge, coming to a stop when he saw Kaylee sitting alone with her head in her hands.

“Kaylee, you okay?” he asked taking several steps toward her. Kaylee looked up and tried for a smile, but fell uncharacteristically short.

“Me, Wash? No, I’m fine, just tired’s all.”

“Yeah, I get you there,” he looked into the infirmary window, but the room was empty. “We get paid today?” he asked finally. The coiling in his stomach told him the answer before the look on her face did.

“Don’t know, no one’s bothered t’ tell me,” Kaylee said with acres of heartache filling her voice. “But to judge by the looks on their faces I’d have t’ go with no.”

“Yeah, I had a feeling.” Wash said resting his hands on his hips. He sighed. Damn it, they needed money. He looked up at the mechanic again, “You seen my wife?” he asked with an attempt at a playful tone.

“She’s in the showers I think. All of ‘em smelled somethin’ awful when they came on board.”

“Thanks.”

He turned and made his way back to the small locker room area, and heard the sound of rushing water. He crossed the tiny room reaching the three narrow stalls in four long strides, and stood in front of the one that was closed.

“Zo, you in there?” She didn’t answer, but he could see enough of her outline through the deformed glass to know it was her. He pulled it open a crack and looked inside. Zoë leaned against the wall, her saturated curls stretching with the weight of the water forming a long curtain that shielded most of her upper body. “You alright, Baby?” he asked, brow furrowing in concern. She didn’t respond vocally, but simply turned to look at him.

There wasn’t m

Comments
Saturday, 27 August 2005 22:58
Awwwww.

Darlin' I already told you this is fantastic. And it really, really is. So very, very sweet.
Sunday, 28 August 2005 03:20
Awww..... (you'll be getting that alot)

That was a sweet sweet story. I'm ubberimpressed! Good job!
Sunday, 28 August 2005 11:45
I could *so* see this playing out but I want to know what happened and if they are in trouble how deep is it and will they get out and how and... huh, everything I guess. I want it all! Very shiny, thanks, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 28 August 2005 13:28
Good on ya, all around. I also enjoyed "The Pacifier", though I seem to have neglected to feed it back.
Sunday, 28 August 2005 19:26
Mal's face at the end must have been a sight to see.
COOLBREEZ
Monday, 29 August 2005 01:29
Oh so good. How do you do it... completely nail the characters like that. What a great read!!
PIXIEGRRL
Wednesday, 31 August 2005 05:34
You just made me fall in love with Wash/Zoe.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 21 September 2005 02:03
Oh, awwwwwwwwww. Yeah this was so sweet and well written and in character. I loved the end. Hmm, Wash and Zoe. This was beautiful. :)
SERENITYWARREN
Saturday, 01 October 2005 08:45
I just can't seem to get enough of your writing!
You paint a wonderful picture with your words thats so plesant to read :)
Sunday, 09 October 2005 04:57
WARNING: Serenity spoilers. Wash. I can't seem to get enough of him, now that he's a casualty of war. Gorram it! I can't recall ever being all that interested in fanfic on Wash/Zoe in the Blue Sun Room before now. But feeling the sore lack of Wash for me AND for Zoe, your rendition of these tender moments (PERFECTLY in character for both of them, in dialogue, movement, form and grace) was like the balm in Gilead. Thank you. Please give us more. Make him live again, live with us and with Zoe (and the rest of the Serenity family.)
-Roving Eye

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