Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Male Bonding

Sunday, November 13, 2005

That title sounds a bit slashy doesn't it? But it's not, I promise.
Mal wants to make friendly with the locals, but things go like they usually do.
Mal, Wash, Jayne, Simon

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3922    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Gorram it, who turned on the lights?” Jayne Cobb grimaced against the brightness, then touched a large hand to the bandage taped high on his forehead.

“I think they call it the sun, Jayne, you know that giant glowing orb in the sky that sheds light on all life?” Wash smirked over at Jayne, curled up into a ball in the corner. The mercenary just growled and pulled his jacket over his head. Next to Wash another body stirred and Simon peeked out from beneath a rough wool blanket.

“Wash tone down your voice a bit if you would, please.”

“But it’s morning. Wake up sunshine.”

“Wash, I swear to hell if you don’t shut your trap, I’ll shut it for you.” Mal growled from across the small room. “How is it you ain't got a hangover?”

“I think I’m still drunk actually.” Wash replied cheerily. There was a protesting growl from the other three men, and a possible grumbling about murder from under the olive drab jacket in the corner.

“What exactly happened last night?" Simon asked, pushing himself up to sit. He leaned back against the wall, pressed his hand to his face, and pushed back his mess of brown hair.

“I’m a little fuzzy on the details my own self.” Mal said, finally appearing from beneath his long brown coat.

“I’m fuzzy on everything…” Wash interrupted. Mal gave him a look and continued.

“But, I do seem to remember going into the bar with Wash.”

~

“Why exactly are we here again?” Wash asked, looking around the large oddly furnished bar with a curious sort of mocking.

“I told you, we’re putting in an appearance.”

“But, see, that’s exactly the part I’m not quite understanding. An appearance for what?”

“These people feel better about hiring folk for a job, iffen they seen their face around before. So, we’ll be spending a few days, just hangin’ around, and bein’ friendly like.”

“Okay, and why exactly did you need me for this… appearance?”

“You asked for some leave.”

“Technically it’s not leave if you have to go where the Captain tells you, and do what the Captain tells

Comments
Sunday, 13 November 2005 06:54
Wow, major typos. Hopefully I got them all this time.
Sunday, 13 November 2005 07:08
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Sunday, 13 November 2005 10:36
Very funny, I loved how with all the fighting and all our boys looked out for each other. Yup, nice bit of bonding. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 13 November 2005 20:05
i was gonna quoote a coupla lines, but there were just too many!!! i'm helpless here!!!

b
Sunday, 13 November 2005 20:06
i was gonna quote a coupla lines, but there were just too many!!! i'm helpless here!!! who woulda thought simon could start a bar brawl?

b
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Sunday, 13 November 2005 20:11
Very funny!!
CUB
Monday, 14 November 2005 08:40
This was extremely well-written. Your Wash is among the best I've ever read. All the characters are good, but you really have Wash down.

This probably could have been multiple chapters, but I'm not complaining.
Monday, 21 November 2005 14:57
HEHE I LOVED IT! That is so what Inara would do and say "keep moving" heheh... ok sorry i'm a shipper so there is where my mind goes, but i think you did great with wash and even beter with the reaction of all the women (well their is the chanse they would have been a bit mader, but probibly not.)
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 08:28
This had one of the funniest fight scenes I've ever read. I could totally see this happening to the guys. Also loved how Simon handled himself :)
Saturday, 07 January 2006 05:33
Aw, cute story - but the girls should've let 'em sit ;)
Sunday, 22 January 2006 11:30
Love all the male bonding. And Jayne getting them a job. Real fun and a great fight scene.
Friday, 03 February 2006 21:20
Loved it! The character voices were great and even their actions in the fight were authentic to the characters...well done!
Saturday, 11 February 2006 06:03
Haha, this is one of the best Firefly comedies I've ever read. I thoroughly enjoyed it! Very funny and well written. Heh, everyone loves a good bar room brawl once in a while. Great job.
Thursday, 30 March 2006 03:22
This is wat me and my buds are doin dis weekend

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