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Kaylee's Lament -- Part Twenty-Five

Friday, August 26, 2005

The Caper over, the crew spends some quiet time reflecting.

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Kaylee’s Lament

Part Twenty-Five

Prospect Station was a sleepy little commercial space station orbiting around the only appreciable planet left around a red star. The planet was a mottled brown terrestrial world that had a thin carbon-dioxide atmosphere and virtually no water of any sort. When it was first discovered, the exploitation rights were sold to a speculative terraforming corporation interested in developing the world. The poor condition of the sun, and the near total lack of an Oort system to provide cometary ice, made it a weak candidate for terraforming. Life could not exist without air and water, and it was too gorram expensive to import from other systems. So the idea of terraforming the 11,000 mile wide rock was abandoned, and the company that owned the rights converted their exploration facility into a small fueling and supply depot for surveyors and colonists headed for the further reaches of the Rim.

During the War, Prospect got an economic shot in the arm when the Alliance used it as a supply dump for Operation Onslaught, a punishing push into the Rim worlds that ended in disaster for the Alliance at the Battle of Riker’s Field. While Prospect was built up in preparation for a second major push, the Battle of Serenity Valley effectively ended the War , and with it most of the potential for Prospect Station to become more than a quiet little fueling station.

Today that was just what it was. Only a hundred and fifty or so souls inhabited the station that had, at one point during the war, held a hundred times that many for a few short, miserable, cramped and uncomfortable weeks. Now more than eighty percent of the station was deserted and depressurized. No one came to Prospect unless they were headed somewhere else. And even that was getting rarer.

Which made Prospect an ideal, out-of-the-way place for Serenity to refuel.

It was a little out of their way. It added an additional twelve hours to their journey, but it still put them in Trinity with plenty of time befor

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Friday, 26 August 2005 15:26
Only a few more to go . . . but it'll be worth stickin' around to see how it ends, I promise.

StA
Friday, 26 August 2005 18:21
Gorramit, them darn pirates need pulverising into itty bitty teeny weeny atoms. Yay, Serenity and her trusty crew to the rescue! (I hope). Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 26 August 2005 18:39
Words... Can't... Describe...

It just keeps getting better and better.

I've laughed, I've cried, I've snorted Pepsi out of my nose, and I've startled co-workers with my surprised gasps (they must think I'm having seizures over here).

Your story is terrific. It makes me wish that every episode had this much detail and depth - which, of course, would have been impossible. As much as I love seeing these characters on the screen, your writing has made me love them even more.

Thanks, and I'll be stickin' around!
Friday, 26 August 2005 19:02
Just when I think this story can't get any better, you do your great magic. Thank you so very much for an amazing ride.
I really, truly love all the interpersonal dialogues and insights that you present to us with the characters -- certainly, I even read aloud the conversation between Inara and Kaylee and enjoyed the telling of Gilgamesh and Ishtar. I wish that the too many of us who have struggled through the theft of our persons had such a wonder as Inara. You've filled out parts of our "sacred whore's" personality that I've been waiting for! This is a great gift and I'll be happy to share it with others.
"All Acts of Love and Pleasure are My Rituals," indeed.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 26 August 2005 19:11
definitely will be sticking around - Kaylee's Lament can't end without Kaylee fully getting Simon, riiiiiiiight?
Friday, 26 August 2005 20:29
Wow. Just. . .wow. That's all.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 26 August 2005 20:57
Oh no! I'd forgotten about the Tong.

Especially liked "...to father, which was a different order of suffering entirely. "

Dr Tam might be just the thing to heal Kaylee, provided he can get over that foot-in-mouth disease. (though, myself, I think Kaylee crucifies Simon over the tiniest things)
Friday, 26 August 2005 21:27
c'est magnifique!
yeppers, that's french!
Friday, 26 August 2005 21:37
Oh, I believe that, I surely do :)
Saturday, 27 August 2005 01:24
Shiny-ness!!! Time to spank some naughty Tong members!! Something tells me they will get very polite when the BDH show up.... Only to allow the McClintocks to really smack them soundly.

Keep on flyin',

K
Saturday, 27 August 2005 10:08
Brilliant!!!

And woah! This explanation of Book's was the best i've ever read for Mal and Inara's tragic love.

"Inara suffered from her love – Book was not so blind as to see her dilemma, loving a man who despised what she did but loved who she was; to leave was to reject love, to stay was to, ultimately, reject her vocation."
Captured it perfectly !! :)
Saturday, 27 August 2005 14:18
tres shiny!!!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 14 September 2005 04:03
The way you (through Inara) spoke of our Power made me even more proud to be a Woman.

Wonderful job as always.

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