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Kaylee's Lament -- Part Twenty-Two

Sunday, August 21, 2005

Anyone up for a rousing chase scene? Cue up the banjo music . . .

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Kaylee’s Lament

Part Twenty-Two

“This is really highly irregular,” Wendell said, looking around his loading bay in a daze. There were bodies, and smoke, and bullet holes, and blood . . .

He hadn’t realized there would be blood. And bodies. He felt a little ill.

“Sorry, Wendell, didn’t mean t’trouble you.” Kuan looked sympathetic, but happy. “Just concluded up our negotiations. Pretty successful by my estimation. So we’ll tidy up a might and be on our way.”

“You wha—?”

“Uh, Darryl gone t’get our last crewman, then we’ll be headed back to th’Rim, hot jets. Outa your hair for-ever.”

Wendell was about to reply when he caught sight of a well-dressed man in mirrored sunglasses – and full combat gear. The suit was impeccably tailored. There was a really big knife on his belt. There was a little splash of blood on his face that ran from his lower right cheek to his left temple. Kuan noticed his reaction.

“This is the company business manager. Brought him in to finish up the acquisition discussions.

“Pleasure,” the man said, nodding and smiling politely. That was really a very impressive gun he was carrying. One of many. That didn’t make what he had to say any easier.

“You – you have to wait,” he said, finally, when he recovered at least a bit of his senses. “You have to wait for the Alliance investigation.”

“The what?” Kuan didn’t look at all pleased. Either did the business manager – clearly some corporate hot-shot with a wall full of business degrees they hired for this job.

“Alliance. The Alliance has to investigate. I checked the manual. It’s very clear, after an incident like this there has to be an inquiry. Not just the usual law-enforcement investigation, but the Alliance Transport Safety Agency has to be informed, and the regional coroner of course – he’s on Agni – and the local Magistrate, have to get his office involved. And the Alliance Colonial Shipping Board, and the Alliance Interstellar—”

“Wendell,” Kuan said in a low, soft, and thoroughly intimidati

Comments
Sunday, 21 August 2005 19:08
Shoot, just one more today . . .
Sunday, 21 August 2005 19:26
i finish one and then there is a whole 'nother waiting for me!
um-- would jayne really care about the room? i thought he proved himself a little higher than that.
ohmygoodness! a floral bonnet ode! yippeee!! great as always!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 21 August 2005 19:55
I agree with reallykaylee about Jayne wanting Kaylee's room- Jayne is better then that. and Mal would have shoot him dead for saying it.

Sunday, 21 August 2005 20:01
Perhaps I wasn't clear enough -- my apologies.

Jayne was as whole-heartedly in favor of the pursuit as anyone. But he does have an image to uphold, and overtly revealing his inner feelings -- even when the rest of the group agreed -- would be, in my opinion, a violation of his self-preservation/badass personae. Hence, instead of saying, 'yes, yes, let us go forth and rescue her!' he can say the same thing about his hat, maintain his image, and keep his psyche happey. Them emotions, they's powerful confounded.

Besides, it was funny.

ScrewtheAlliance
Sunday, 21 August 2005 20:02
GO MAL! GO MAL! GO MAL!!!
Sunday, 21 August 2005 20:03
Oh, and the room thing -- Jayne's a tactless pragmatist. He may be loyal -- now -- but that doesn't change his inner nature.

StA
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 21 August 2005 20:07
*grovel grovel*
sorry! i will never doubt again! but i think he may be able to change. . . please? maybe? oh i trust your judgement so lets see how this finishes!
M.L
reallykaylee
"work, work work"
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 21 August 2005 21:28
Ever thought of going for a book deal?

Not the preacher, mind.
Sunday, 21 August 2005 22:33
*giggle*

Has anyone mentioned that you just plain rock?
Sunday, 21 August 2005 23:30
Never steal a man's horse, woman, or silly hat. It just ain't right.

You're like an athlete, a gold-medal winning update athlete.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 22 August 2005 03:37
This is the story that just keeps on givin, gotta love it
Monday, 22 August 2005 04:52
Absolutely amazing! This has got to be one of the best fanfics out there.

You have a gift for dialogue ... these ARE the characters we know and love, and every word out of their mouths rings true.

Impatient for more!

(although my bladder thanks you for the break)
Monday, 22 August 2005 19:15
gosh i love this story
Tuesday, 23 August 2005 00:09
Kaylee's Lament has become my daily entertainment. It gives me a break from compulsively checking my email every two minutes.<p>
I'm sorry to see Kaylee (again) in a compromising position. This bastard Milo had better get it as good as Early.<p>
At least her being in danger makes sense. She's one of, if not THE, most vulnerable characters. Imagine if someone threatened to rape Zoe. Poor Kaylee.
Tuesday, 23 August 2005 22:13
Oh how I wish Kaylee had just cracked that *tamade hundan* on the back of his gorram head then it wouldn't have mattered that the gun didn't work. I so would not like to be in his shoes right now, Mal is going to dance across his bones with the kind of vengeance Reavers only dream of. Yay, let's go get Kaylee! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 29 August 2005 07:35
Hot damn, this is one rip-roaring story! It really ought to be a movie.

Amazing action sequences, and the characterizations are flawless.

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