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Kaylee's Lament -- Part Twenty-One

Sunday, August 21, 2005

Zoe and Wash have a heartfelt relationship discussion. WARNING -- GRAPHIC VIOLENCE

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Kaylee’s Lament

Chapter Twenty-One

Wendell hadn’t had this much excitement in . . . well, never. Nothing even came close. It was like some tawdry popular adventure show, gone horribly awry.

First that disgusting-looking Captain Kuan, and her disreputable crew, showing up with their ancient, rusting hulk, and their big, nasty-looking guns. Then the even more disgusting one-eyed, toothless Milo Morgan shows up with four security officers and a copy of a dubious-looking complaint ordering the binding by law of the crew for larceny – hardly surprising, in his opinion. That was exciting enough (in a morbid kind of way). Morgan’s ID and papers did match the owner’s name on the ship’s manifest, and the crew seemed to know him. But to have your own brother bound by law? That didn’t seem right, even according to the chaotic standards of what must pass for morality on the Rim.

What was worse, there was now some doubt about the disposition of the cargo. As the agreement had been originally been with the Pear Blossom division of the company, could he really count on Morgan fulfilling it? As owner of the company he was legally bound to honor the contract, but Wendell didn’t get the feeling that Morgan was too awfully concerned with legalities. Between the eyepatch and that horrible lisping, sucking mouth, he looked more than half pirate himself.

And then he had brought all those men with him, allegedly his new “crew”. Wendell actually recognized a few of them as dockyard bums, and a few others he had seen on the station’s police blotter. Now they were walking around his dock with guns – lots of guns. They intimidated the stevedores into working faster – clearly a violation of their union contract, one that would certainly come up at the next management relations meeting. And they grinned a lot. Wendell hated those grins. They looked . . . feral.

All things considered, he preferred Kuan. Sure, she had been crude, smelly, and hideous to look at, but she had been reasonably civil and mor

Comments
Sunday, 21 August 2005 13:23
Are we havin' fun yet?
Sunday, 21 August 2005 13:45
Bad guys never learn: don't mess with The Crew.
Sunday, 21 August 2005 13:54
Wonderfull as always Screw!
Sunday, 21 August 2005 13:58
What are you doing asking silly questions...

Go save Kaylee!!!

Sunday, 21 August 2005 15:30
*sigh*

Wash and Zoe are just too damn adorable. This is such a fantastic read. Looking forward to seeing how Kaylee's rescue goes.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 21 August 2005 17:24
And another fawst update. I'll keep radinh if you keep writing 'em.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 21 August 2005 17:33
Lovely! Especially like Wash's "vaguely medieval running commentary".

Sibeal
Sunday, 21 August 2005 18:06
who needs relationship counselling? all ya need is a good firefight to work out your differences!
Tuesday, 23 August 2005 21:47
Yay, our Big Damn Heroes rescue Serenity! I'm a bit miffed that Morgan escaped even more so as Mal and the others stepped out of character and now he knows way too much. Gulp! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 30 January 2006 12:33
Oh my God how awesome was that chapter.
I am slowly working my way through all your stuff and was gonna comment at the end but this was such a good visual that i can't help it.

Absolutely fantastic and my favorite chapter so far. You're great at writing action!

Taya
Monday, 30 January 2006 12:33
Oh my God how awesome was that chapter.
I am slowly working my way through all your stuff and was gonna comment at the end but this was such a good visual that i can't help it.

Absolutely fantastic and my favorite chapter so far. You're great at writing action!

Taya

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