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Kaylee's Lament -- Part Nineteen

Friday, August 19, 2005

What the heck? Y'all been good, lately. Here's another part.
River discovers how to flirt.
WARNING: GRAPHIC VIOLENCE

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4966    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Kaylee’s Lament

Part Nineteen

“How long we been in here?” Zoe asked, ugly hat slumped down over her temporarily horribly scarred face.

“Don’t know,” Mal said, his head pillowed by his arms. He had managed a few ten-minute catnaps, switching off with Zoe, but he had a hard time sleeping on the stainless steel bench. Cold, hard, frozen ground, covered with rubble and blood and mud and rain and eight other kinds of nastiness – that, he could sleep on. A stainless steel bench that seemed to be just an inch short of wide enough, no matter how he turned, that he had trouble with. “They took my watch.”

“Can’t be more’n two hours,” she said. “They should be about to try something heroically stupid.”

“That’s what I’d be doing,” Mal agreed. “Let’s see, which they get first: us or Serenity?”

“Toughie,” Zoe admitted. “I’d go for us. We’re better assets in the short term.”

“I think it’ll be the ship. Don’t forget, Jayne’s in charge. He’ll want to nail that ship down before he does anything stupid.”

“I think Inara’s gonna have a say,” Zoe insisted. “And if Wash is involved, he’s definitely gonna have a say. And Kaylee.”

“Nah, I still say the ship. We’re kind of expendable.”

“You think my man is going to ever find him something this good again?” she gave a harsh laugh. “No, they’re gonna get us out, first.”

Mal lifted his head and looked at her. “How much?”

“Fifty? Same as those per diems – which should still work, I’d wager.”

“You just did.” They shook on it. They shook on all their private bets, from how many rollers were going to roll on over them in the War to how many times Jayne and Simon would get into it any particular evening.

“There is the third possibility,” she said, after a while.

“That they ain’t comin’ for us?”

“Crossed my mind.”

“Nah. Never happen. Only been a couple o’ hours. They’re probably still in the planning stages. They won’t want to rush anything, do anything stupid. Especially your man.”

“Ha! My hubby? Likely hiding in a trash chute som

Comments
Friday, 19 August 2005 15:36
Couldn't help myself.
Friday, 19 August 2005 16:07
Wowsie! Thank you. This series is really fantastic. I hope you don't give yourself carpal tunnel from typing so much because we need more!
Friday, 19 August 2005 16:32
damn! that's the good stuff
Friday, 19 August 2005 16:53
Outstanding. You really seem to write these things as fast as I can read them.
Friday, 19 August 2005 17:48
You know, when you described this as River learning to flirt, then followed with a violence warning, I couldn't stop giggling.

You did it perfectly.

And you're gorram amazing for getting it done so fast.

ANONYMOUS
Friday, 19 August 2005 18:29
Thus my appetite for fearless heroics was sated. . .by River!?!?! Great chapter, especially enjoyed the "shards" of training angle.

Keep the machine hot, you've picked up a whole boatload of happy readers.

-Canton
Friday, 19 August 2005 20:18
I am so friggin' jealous I can't even see straight to read the next chapter. All I can write is porn, and "write" might be too strong a word there.
Friday, 19 August 2005 20:53
"screwthealliance we love you
screwthealliance you help us to grow
you have a circle of love around you
you have a circle of love in your heart"

(sung by adoring fans around a campfire)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 19 August 2005 21:08
woot

very woot
Friday, 19 August 2005 22:44
River was brilliant, just loved it! Can't wait to see what happens next - shiny. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 19 August 2005 23:33
*gapes stupidly*

Ai ya, hwai leh!

How on earth does it keep getting better every gorram time?!
Friday, 19 August 2005 23:47
Wow, you do realise that having copied the whole series into MS Word that it's 238 pages long! I think you officially have a novel now!
Saturday, 20 August 2005 01:06
This story just gets better and better!!! Shiny work all around!

Keep flyin',

K
Saturday, 20 August 2005 01:08
Oh yeah.... for River it's all about the math!!
Who'd of thunk of an Armani Jayne??? in Ray-Bans!!!!!??? Sheer Tamade Shinyness


K
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 21 August 2005 00:26
fantasmagorical as per usual, i really feel like i should be paying to read this or something. anyone else getting that feeling?
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 22 August 2005 06:13
WoW. Wow.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 28 August 2005 23:57
Excellent, as always.

For me, River has always been the most fascinating character of them all. She's a mass of internal contradictions with a limitless potential for catalyzing unexpected plot twists. Her mysterious history is fascinating, too, because it raises so many questions. I would love to read more River-centric fics.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 23 November 2005 01:01
"River discovers how to flirt. WARNING: GRAPHIC VIOLENCE." Ha! This chapter was worth it for the header alone!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 December 2005 06:27
Wow. The way you described River's attack on the guards.. how do you know all those little details, about neckbones and optic nerves and things? Also, there was a lot that made me laugh out loud in this chapter, but especially,
“Who would have thought? Little River, all grown up and helping her friends and family commit multiple felonies, just like a big girl.” Wash sounded thoughtful.

heehee

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