Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Adam's Rib Ch 6: Awakenings.

Tuesday, August 16, 2005

Things are always darkest before the dawn. Strap on your seat belts, kiddies, it's going to be a bumpy ride.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4093    RATING: 10.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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***

His eyes scanned the sheet on his desk. Text scrolled down the page next to the photos. Followed by a number. A contact number. Every medical center that he knew, and probably every one he didn't, had this sheet.

Stephen and Katie Hoffman looked nothing like the pictures of Simon and River Tam. Not even with clever disguises or corrective surgery could his patient be the person they were looking for. The fact still remained, however, that they weren't what they claimed. And they fit the bill of being connected to a Firefly Class transport ship.

Well, they were connected to a Firefly compatible shuttle. It just didn't seem to click into place. From what little he'd seen of her, Katie Hoffman did not seem like a particularly dangerous fugitive, neither did her husband. She had seemed honest in a Universe where that was rare. But she had lied. To him.

Dr. Williams's hand hovered over the com deck as he tried to decide.

***

"Hey." Kaylee stood by the table and watched as Wash turned to meet her. "How are you doing in here?"

"Katie?" He whispered and she had to stop herself from gasping at the dark shadows under his eyes. "You came back?"

She bit on a frown, sat down across from him and looked at the papers he had collected. They were blank pages. A lot of them. Her back bristled as someone walked behind her and she relaxed only slightly when it turned out to be another patient shuffling past.

"Of course I came back." Leaning forward, she picked up his hand and held it in hers. It was cold. "I couldn't leave you here by yourself."

"I thought..." His eyes couldn't focus on her as he looked left to right, anywhere but at her. "I mean... with the..."

"I managed to get the laundry done." She continued. "I found that shirt with the lamb on it. You know? The lamby to

Comments
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 17:55
You can't stop now! Who is this stranger? How will our heroes be reunited? Please don't make us wait to find out!

*deep breaths*

Very, very shiny story.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 21:08
Well, looks like all I have to do is threaten to write it myself, then a new chapter magically appears!
Yay for me!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 22:57
Oh wow. That was excellent. I was reading at work... bad me. Fantastic. I'm not really a River/Kaylee fan (give me all the Jayne/Kaylee you got), but even I got behind this and loved every word. Particularly the bit about Jayne and fish in a barrell, that had me giggling out loud...not good in a medical office.

Rinny
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 10:30
Fabulous, creepy and emotionally edgy to the point where I can't wait to see what the good gorram happens next! Poor poor Kaylee but more delighted and relieved than words can express to get Wash back. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
RUBYMOSS
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 13:15
Early? Is that you?
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 15:03
No, no it's not. <-- 'cause I like to tease. :p
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 21:19
gee. . . that was wicked awesome.
um, transport ships don't have firepower.
so magnificent!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 23:14
The ship itself, no, but the weapons lockers in that cargo bay may come in handy.

;)

Thanks for reading, guys.

- Jacqui
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 19 August 2005 13:22
Oky. It's Friday and I'm ready for the next chapter.
Now.
Sunday, 21 August 2005 07:49
OMG.
This was the first chapter i read, and already i am emotionally involved, even coming in partway through the story.
More please!! They need to get to Kaylee!!!
Monday, 06 March 2006 14:49
Super! *goes to read next bit*
Monday, 20 October 2008 13:25
great chapter to further this beatiful story.

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