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Kaylee's Lament -- Part Fifteen

Tuesday, August 16, 2005

We get to see what Mal's been musin' about, and speculate on the cosmological allegience of details.

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Kaylee’s Lament

Chapter Fifteen

“There she goes,” Mal said, a wistful tone in his voice. “Never thought I’d see the day she left Serenity.”

The she that he was speaking of was a very heavy box. It was designed to withstand all manner of ugliness in the Black and survive. Serenity’s transponder. If the engine was Serenity’s heart, and the bridge her brain, then this was as close to a soul as a ship could mechanically have.

Active, it would broadcast the ship’s data to anyone who cared to look. Passive, it did little save record telemetry and do a limp broadcast of the ship’s unique transponder code, useful for proximity alarms to detect once your vessel had been scragged by Reavers, overcome with mutiny, merely exploded, or subject to the ten thousand other ailments her mortal steel was heir to. It could be shielded (and was, by smart smugglers) to avoid easy detection, but it was factory sealed against casual invasion. Wherever she went, whatever happened to her, it would be recorded here for investigators. It was record of her whole life, from the moment she came “alive” to the present moment. The radiovoltaic cell inside insured it a long, long life. And it was designed to not be removed from the ship. Ever.

Ever is a long time. Between Kaylee, Tinker, and Althea, they had removed it—after two solid days of knuckle-bruising work. But it had been necessary.

One of the main problems with the Plan was the not-getting-caught part. Dropping out of the sky on a lonesome piece of prairie on an untamed moon in the middle of the night to steal something was easy, and unlikely to get you caught. Flying right up to an Alliance supply depot, having the loot loaded on by unionized Alliance stevedores, and getting away without a trace, well, that was a little out of Serenity’s element. The Alliance port facility would latch on to Serenity’s transponder the moment she came within range, and regardless of what other fancy flying the ship did, the transponder code would be forever recorded i

Comments
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 16:16
Thank you, thank you all for your high praise. You've done me a great kindness. A lot of the things said here have been very intriguing, and y'all's comments are the reason I get the next chapter done so quickly. After the final chapter (and this thing has expanded from a plotted 18 to at least 20-22) I'll reveal some items that might be of interest to you all, including my past experience and future plans. Right now, I'm just having fun writing the story.

BTW, I know I screwed up the "forte" thing -- but it's been 15 years since I took fencing. I'll go back and fix it Real Soon Now.

Anyone see where this is going? Anyone? Anyone?

Thanks again for reading!

ScrewtheAlliance
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 17:06
I'm loving this - both the story and the regular updates. Wash's plan B and Book's "You people weary me" are wonderful.

I'm not sure where this is going but I am totally enjoying the ride.

Sibeal
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 18:13
I like Book at the end of this. My favorite was the "collar and a book" line; I laughed out loud. I don't have a clue where you're going with this, but I suspect that Mal's Bad Luck will show up at the most crucial moment...
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 20:13
I dig the story, but you don't need to remind me to respect and revere Captain Morgan.

Droppy
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 20:13
i've given my praise anonymously in the past (because i had yet to register) but i gotta say it again, you're great! I was talking to a friend of mine who recently got sucked into the world of firefly and i confused actual story lines with this fic. also i recently came across a guy named spike, who is rather sly and has broadway aspirations. thank you so much for contributing your story. and updating it before i'm even ready to read it.
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 20:15
I'm the anon above unsavory.

Once again, I've been enjoying this immensely (so much i forgot how to spell certain words apparently).

Droppy
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 21:53
The name bit was a hoot!!!

All in all, just plain great
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 21:57
BC here:

*L* On the one hand I feel sorry for Book but on the other I love it. :) And Simon is right this is an important detail.

*Laughs leaving the board*
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 22:01
who care's who's in the details - they're all SHINY!!!!!!!!
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 00:24
Another excellent chapter.

I tend to wait a day or two after you post; that way I have more to read at once. It isn't helping me in my impatience for more...

Can't wait till the next update!
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 02:26
Sneeking the real world in the back door, eh?

What does "Tchenwah" mean?

And you can defend yourself against the George Carlin-esque forte-oriented onslaught by pleading "popular usage." Which do you think will actually survive, the book version or the way folks talk?
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 03:40
*giggles* jayne. subtle. same sentence.

hehehe
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 11:24
tchenwah = drunken whore
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 11:44
Really enjoying this very much. I can so picture Mal considering his 'bad luck' and liked the notion that River was the reason his luck was getting better. Book was funny at the end though I am surprised he didn't launch into a long monologue about God concerning the details. Or maybe God was too busy on the fuzzy subject of kneecaps to take much notice? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 15:13
tchenwah = drunken whore... huh, thanks for letting us know! Shows what Kaylee thinks there eh. Love the story, and you update so quickly!
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 22:12
kizzie...HOW IN THE HELL CAN DETAILS BE SHINY?!? *wanders off muttering something about "cousins" and "tweaked"*

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