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Adam's Rib Ch 5: Bridges Burned.

Thursday, August 11, 2005

Things get a little frosty, relationships are mended, and mistakes are made.

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Disclaimer: Yadda, yadda, Joss, yadda, yadda, Fox.

Comments: 1)To avoid confusion, I'll clear it up now: River's dream is written in the present tense, but it is a memory, not happening in the timeline of the fic itself.

2) Imagine my delight when an interview with Joss regarding the upcoming movie had him stating that, even if it wasn't delved into specifically, fans could now accept as canon the fact that Book once took orders from evil, evil men. Hence the advancement of his role in this story.

Feedback: Don't make me beg... please? wily_one24@yahoo.com.au .

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Zoe paced the ship, unable to sleep. She kept telling herself it wasn't because of the stories River had almost been telling. The pictures that the disembodied words had bought forth. She wondered if Mal or Simon or Kaylee had gotten the same images or had processed the words into their own meanings.

She clutched her elbows tighter, shivering. It had gotten noticeably colder too fast to make any form of sense. Her memory flashed at her, not too quickly, she saw all the small indications that they had ignored the day before. A shiver here, River's breath on the window there.

A moon, she remembered, is drained of all heat the minute the sunlight disappears, unable to retain any of it. Not that the sun had given them much heat at all, merely a relief from cold. It still didn't explain why the ship had lost heat.

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Book had tried to sleep, but hadn't come anywhere near an approximation of it. He decided to see if anyone else was awake. It was when he tried to sit up, for the first time in a matter of hours, that he noticed the stiffness of his joints, the reluctance of his body to move.

The fact that he had not noticed the cold did not surprise him. It reminded him of a parable from Earth that Was. That if you put a frog in a pot of boiling water it will jump right out, but if you place it in a pot of warm water it will stay still, content to remain while the water is slowly heated until the

Comments
Thursday, 11 August 2005 14:58
Yikes! All the threads coming together to make a rope around the necks of our heroes. A very fine story - Makes me nostalgic for the show.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 11 August 2005 15:03
This is masterfully plotted. I am really enjoying this, and I am finding myself checking in here at fff.net to see if you added another chapter. Can't wait for the next installment. Diz <- too lazy to log in.
Thursday, 11 August 2005 17:56
Oh wow, Inara, this is a *very* dangerous game you're playing but I am so glad that Zoe and Mal have been keeping tabs though not sure what will happen next. And poor Wash, getting the kind of drugs that may or may not make him crazy for real. Yikes, can't wait to see what happens next! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 13 August 2005 01:57
OOOooh. It's gettin'
SCAAA-RY! Hurry up with the next part already!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 14 August 2005 22:39
I'm still waiting for part 6 gorramit!
Monday, 15 August 2005 05:55
Like the story hope we don't have much longer to wait for the next part.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 13:12
If the next part isn't forthcoming soon I'm gonna write it myself. There's a scary thought, lol.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 16:23
All right, you were warned. Here goes:

(Inara's hand twitched just a little as she poured the tea. The doctor, who seemed so disinterested in the ritual when she last performed it, was watching her a little too closely now.
She set the teacup before him and sat facing him on the couch.
"You seem a little tense" she said. Just the barest hint of hesitation tinged her voice. Only someone who knew her well would notice it.)


Had enough? or should I keep writing?
Monday, 06 March 2006 11:12
Wowowowowow!! Fantastic :D
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 30 March 2006 20:54
"River run through here?"


"Not a one, nor ponds or lakes." Mal spoke seriously, but there was humor in his eyes. "Or natural water sources of any kind."


"We got a tap of tank water if ya want." Was Jayne's helpful suggestion.


"Thanks."

I love it, you write so well.
Sunday, 09 July 2006 05:08
"You asked." River complained.
HAHAHAHAHA!!!
Monday, 20 October 2008 13:25
another great chapter to the story and i just love what river says about Kaylee at the supper table when Janye ask about dirty stories.

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