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Kaylee's Lament -- Part Nine

Wednesday, August 10, 2005

Wash and Kaylee go scavenging, and Kaylee makes her first kill.

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Kaylee’s Lament

Part Nine

Cold, wet, and exhausted, Kaylee clung tightly to the mule as it rumbled into the pressureless airlock that connected Onyx with the frozen wasteland that was Set. Despite her aching body and her mostly-frozen brain, she was elated.

Not many ventured out into the Outside. There were gangs of scavengers who picked through decades-old junk in the debris fields south of the city, looking for pieces small and portable enough to be able to sell on the Concourse. But there were little in the way of organized exploitation of this huge frozen bonanza of slighty-used after-market parts (some lightly damaged by battle and/or impact). The scavengers were, in general, non-technicians, folks just desperate enough for coin to feed them another day to bundle their rags tightly around them and poke through the few picked-over wrecks closest to the city. Apart from that, people mostly left the Outside to itself. There were rumors of squatters, of course, violent hermits who made their homes in the derelict hulks . . .

Kaylee and Wash had spent most of the day prowling around the huge Alliance dumps left over from the War. Kaylee was amazed at the sheer volume of parts within the twisted scrap metal. Concerned that ingenious Independents – or other factions —would be attracted to salvage munitions and supplies from wrecks left floating in space after battle, the Alliance had thrown many of the hulks they had recovered in this quadrant down Set’s gravity well and into its freezing maelstrom of atmo, where they wouldn’t trouble anyone or remain a hazard to navigation. After the war, the Alliance had just left, leaving the debris to an icy grave. They were abandoning the world, and they were secure in the knowledge that salvaging the wrecks on any major scale would be cost-prohibitive.

For large-scale operations, they were correct. For quick hit-and-run-and-steal-anything-you-can raids like this, not so much.

The mule was pulling two trailers of salvaged debris, painstakingly r

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 10 August 2005 16:02
Whoa! Nice work! I liked how Kaylee is described loving her ship. Good Wash dialog, too. Keep it up! It's brilliant! You should write novels for the series.
Wednesday, 10 August 2005 16:28
Here we are, half way through, and I've just got to say, this story is aces. Well written and lush with detail and background.

(sycophantic enough for you?)
Wednesday, 10 August 2005 16:29
Oh, this is classic.

And I was with Kaylee in deciding whether or not to pistol whip Wash or just kick him in the balls.

Very nicely done. Keep 'em coming.
Wednesday, 10 August 2005 16:36
Very good, so when they gonna spend all that gorram loot? I feel kind of sorry for the other ship, wonder if that Captain knew Mal and Zoe, him seeming to be a Browncoat as well? Loved the Wash and Kaylee interaction. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 10 August 2005 16:40
"like reavers on a puppy dog"
i plan on using that one! i was so interested about what the gift was going to be-- and wasn't at all disappointed! great! (as usual)
Wednesday, 10 August 2005 17:09
Amusing, entertaining, and riveting. Excellent as usual.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 10 August 2005 21:26
i doubt i will ever manage to work out how you got to be so good at this lark. :) nice work honey.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 11 August 2005 13:00
YAY! yet another great chapter! Like the strawberries, so sweet, they better talk soon!
Love the junk yard salvaging with Kayle and Wash and shooting the spacesuit. :)
More pleeaase!
Sunday, 14 August 2005 15:13
"Mal has done gone and got hisself shot in the anus or the rectum or somthin’!"

gotta love it...
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 27 August 2005 14:30
Lots of fun and so beautifully, wonderfully written!! I especially loved the Mal/River parts.
Saturday, 31 December 2005 02:19
Great job the fighting naked was amazingly funny.

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