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Adam's Rib Ch 4: Retreat.

Monday, August 8, 2005

Answers create more questions. Is there any other way?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4265    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: They're still not mine, they're still a lot better than all my toys. I'm still gonna play with 'em when no one's looking. Kudos to Dan Brown for an idea, it's his idiosyncrasy, not mine.

Comments: This installment is more exposition than plot, but the next one will make up for it, I promise.

Feedback: Always craved, always answered: wily_one24@yahoo.com.au

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Kaylee bit her lip, she hoped she looked nervous for Wash and not plain scared out of her wits as she sat in the doctor's office. The man sitting across from them was big and heavy set and reminded her of Jayne, arms and neck tumbling out of an ill fitting white jacket, his face was round and half covered by a thick, curling beard. He looked absolutely nothing like she had imagined a Core doctor to be like, she had expected someone more Simon. He was smiling at them over the files he was reading. A nice smile, meant to put them at ease, but his eyes were sharp and shrewd.

"It wasn't supposed to be a long trip." She answered. "We were only going to be off planet for a week at most. That was the plan."

She shuffled in her chair so that she was facing both Dr. Williams and Wash next to her, reached out and touched the apex of Wash's ear, thread her fingers through the hair behind it.

"We had it all organized, but..." She looked at the doctor and lowered her voice. "... Reavers."

Wash jerked out of her reach and glared at her.

"Tell them." He accused. "Just tell them everything why don't you?"

"Honey, it's okay." She had to remind herself it was an act. "The doctor's going to help."

"Yes, I am." Dr. Williams set the files on his desk and leaned forward. "All your records are very detailed, Mrs. Hoffman, that's not always the case planet to planet, unfortunately."

"Please." She smiled, sadly. "Call me Katie."

"It's not as simple as restarting medication, however," Kaylee felt her heart seize up. "As I'm sure you know. People tend to build up resistances, doses need to be readjusted peri

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 08 August 2005 16:50
Does anyone have an idea on how Joss feels on Fan Fiction? I'd be curious if anyone knew how he feels on script ideas too.

Thanks,
Rob
Monday, 08 August 2005 17:51
I would imagine he would be flattered his work drives peoples imaginations to the point they have to write more about the subject. But that is just a personal guess. I like this story a lot.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 08 August 2005 21:34
You've got real talent. These new "episodes" are helping tide me over till I can get my hands on the serenity #1 comic.
Tuesday, 09 August 2005 10:02
Your River is so painfully good but you know what? I am really getting worried about Wash putting himself in harm's way in that gorram doctor's hands. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 09 August 2005 12:55
Sorry about not posting in previous chapters, but i read them all at once.
I'm really enjoying this whole story. You've got all the characters down really well, and I especially feel sorry for poor River. You've written her so beautifully.

No Power In The Verse
XOXOX-FREDIKAYLLOW-XOXOX
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 09 August 2005 18:37
Oh, I just read all four chapters at once. Amazing stuff! It's almost like watching a really good episode. You're spot on with the characters and dialog, and the inner thoughts are perfect. More, please. :)
Tuesday, 09 August 2005 22:51
Really appreciate the time you spent writing this stuff. I can imagine all the facial expressions and physical mannersisms of each character in my mind as I read through. I found the turn of Jayne's attitude particularly intersting. Looking forward to your next installment!
Monday, 06 March 2006 10:30
Wow, this is really powerful! I'm so impressed! :D
Monday, 20 October 2008 13:23
another great chapter.

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