Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Sometimes

Sunday, August 7, 2005

She's so soft she makes him hard.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 6868    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: It's fanfic, I don't own 'em. If I did, the show would be restricted to mature aged viewers. Count on it.

Comments: I just can't do PWP, there's always Plot. Damn you, Plot, damn you! Jayne/Kaylee fluff. Adult smutty fluff, but fluff nonetheless.

Feedback: Call me, baby, call me now: wily_one24@yahoo.com.au

***

"Hey! Watch it."

It starts when she trips, running through the cargo bay between the boxes. Her ankle twists and she loses her balance, falling face first into his chest. His arms catch her around the waist and she feels his hands at the base of her spine.

"Sorry Jayne!" Kaylee gasps out.

Then sprints away because she can hear River's laugh getting closer and see a flash of color too close for comfort. Her breath is hot and hard in her chest, her own laugh bubbling up. Her feet know the path of the ship and they land surely on every step, her hand clutching the stair rails and pulling her up faster as she squeals her delight in getting away. She doesn't stop, doesn't have the time.

But her skin remembers, stores it away for later, the feel of those large hands steadying her. A glint in his eye that she doesn't recall being there before, not for her anyways.

***

Hell. There are four women on this gorram boat and a helluva lot more nights to be spending alone. Thoughts wander sometimes, to the women he sees everyday, he ain't been bothered about it much before, but he's been focusing on Kaylee a lot lately and he can't be held responsible for it. Not when she grins at him like that, not when her hands on his arm make him stand rock still.

Who went ahead and told her it was okay to be winking at him? To smile at him so bright when he gave her those gorram apples way back after Ariel? Sure as hell wasn't him. She's just about the only one who'll look at him like he's worth a damn and it cuts just as deep to know he's not.

Somebody has to put a stop to it. Right shameless it is. If'n she found out about some of his thoughts, Jayne k

Comments
Sunday, 07 August 2005 10:12
Very nicely done, my favourite parts were the teasing in Inara's shuttle and especially round the dinner table with the clueless crew trying to catch up on what the good gorram was going on. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 07 August 2005 23:46
brilliante!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 09 August 2005 06:38
Absofreakinglutely amazing. Shiny beyond belief. Friendly-like and erotic as all blazes at the same time. Gods, how well you know the crew! How well they speak through your writing, both in their words, gestures, all of it. And the constant build-ups you so generously gave at all the right gorram moments: J&K barely touch in one scene, barely kiss in another, all-out smoochies another time, then chaste spooning in J's bunk -all the time leaving us wondering if they'll ever really get to tab A into slot B. Delayed satisfaction that, and pure mastery over it too. And then when Jayne's fingers first went there, "Steady on." He whispers. "We ain't nearly done, yet."

"What?" She looks down at him and he gives her his best grin before licking a circle around her belly button, then thrusting his tongue into it as he crooks his finger into her. "Oh... Kwan Yin!" oh...my...sweet..gorram....GODS! I went where Jayne and Kaylee went, sure as there's fire in Serenity. Sweet vermillion hells, Jacqui. You done good. If you ain't been published and paid handsomely for talent like this yet, I'd love to know why not.
RUBYMOSS
Tuesday, 09 August 2005 13:55
Yeeeeeyyyyyy!!! New Jaylee yumminess! Bravo!
Any plans for sequels..please, please? Or alternative takes on their courtship (though how you could better 'Sometimes' I'm not sure..)
That was scrumptious Jacqui! And hot..
Very impressed,
RubyMoss
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ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 10 August 2005 03:46
That was awesome, and entirely believable. I loved all the teasing you had and the joking of the crew. And River's insights were just beautifully written. You have her voice down very well.
PIXIEGRRL
Sunday, 21 August 2005 07:29
Jaylee. Smut. Fluff. Mal Confused. What more could a girl ask for?

Just for the record,
"Musical chairs. Simon forgot to listen."
--Brilliant.

ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 24 August 2005 06:42
I need a fan...
That was...amazing. Seriously - my favourite Jaylee ever.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 01 September 2005 06:54
Oh, I do so love smut. I'm a happy camper. Thank you.
CLARAMATA
Friday, 09 September 2005 05:52
Wow, this was one of the more amazing NC-17 fics I've seen (usually they're just terrible, in my humble opinion). Sweet and oh so right for the characters. Jayne may be a brute, but he'd go slow with Kaylee, because there's real feeling there. You totally converted me to a Jaylee shipper, congrats ^_^
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 14 September 2005 18:40
Um, so good I'm now waiting for you to write many many more fics for me to enjoy. Write them for me, and make them nice and smutty. I never thought I could get behind the Jaylee shipping, but I think you've changed my mind!
-blackeyedgurl
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 19 September 2005 02:59
This had everything. Fluff. Snark. Smut.

*sighs happily*

ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 25 September 2005 09:57
_That_ was good fluff.
Wednesday, 28 September 2005 05:44
I adored this story, I really did. A lot of people can't capture the non-pissy side of Jayne and you've done it, you've shown the softer side of the beast, and I thank you for it.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 02:21
completely shiny!!!! you captured them all so well - i too love the confused looks around the table and misguided guesses as to who's with who. brilliant!!

river's little insights were inspired as well. somehow i have a feeling she'd be exactly like that, too.

again, great work!
AMAUNET
Thursday, 27 October 2005 17:02
That was absoloutly beautiful: you've really captured the benefits of a jaylee fic.

Lovely.
AMAUNET
Thursday, 27 October 2005 17:03
That was absoloutly beautiful: you've really captured the benefits of a jaylee fic.

Lovely.
WELSHY
Wednesday, 28 December 2005 23:18
That was bloody lovely :)

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