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Point of No Return, Part III

Saturday, May 14, 2005

Everyone has a past. Everybody's got something to hate. In the land of the blind...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3194    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: This story is in no way meant to infringe on the rights of Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, or 20th Century Fox. Just wanted to have a bit of fun with these characters is all. Please don’t sue me.

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Rated PG-13 for graphic descriptions and a few Chinese cuss words.

“Point of No Return, Part III”

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“Sunny…wha’s yoo-nif-kayshun?”

Xian Sunyi smiled at her seven-year-old brother. “Unification,” she said, stressing each syllable to correct his enunciation. “It means bringing everybody together so we can all share and live in peace.” She was poured a small glass of juice and set it down in front of him.

Little Xian Wei Lun squirmed. “Mom ‘n’ Dad went to unificate everybody?” he asked, accidentally spitting bits of cereal from his stuffed mouth.

“Don’t be so stupid,” Kai remarked. “Not everybody wants to be unified. That’s why there’s a war. Dumb-ass niao shi de dugui.”

“Watch your tongue!” Sunyi gave her other brother a stern look.

“I wasn’t talking about him,” the thirteen-year-old defended. “If it weren’t for those stupid Independents, there wouldn’t be a war.”

“I don’t care who you were talking about. There’s no need for that kind of language.”

Kai scowled, but didn’t argue any further, and instead concentrated on finishing breakfast. Sunyi empathized. She felt that way herself, but dwelling on such thoughts was useless. Their parents were both enlisted Alliance soldiers, and they had both been called to do their patriotic duty. Sunyi missed them painfully. She wished she weren’t the oldest. She wished the war was over and Mom and Dad would come home soon. But she accepted the fact that, at least for now, this was her responsibility, to take care of her brothers until her parents returned. Whenever that was.

They heard the transport land outside their apartment complex. Sunyi shooed her brothers from the table and out the door. “Learn w

Comments
Saturday, 14 May 2005 22:44
I love the way you give the Reaver a past and an independent identity. I have a nasty habit of sympathizing with villians and this story provides ample reason for this. That is if the reaver here can even be construed as villian. Great work, I can't wait to see what comes next.

One quarry though. . . Assuming the Reaver is Kai (and assuming does have a habit of making an ass of u and me) why doesn't he react violently towards Mal? That is, once again assuming, if Captain tight pants was wearing his standard brown coat.

Phaedra
Sunday, 15 May 2005 00:11
Oooh creepy, Mal and River channeling each other! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 15 May 2005 05:19
Good question, Phaedra. It's probably a safe assumption that Mal was in his standard browncoat attire. As to why the Reaver doesn't react as violently as expected, well...all shall be revealed in due time. Thanks for reading, and I hope you read on to see what happens next.

BTW -- One hundred (imaginary) points to anyone who can identify the "land of the blind" quote.... :)

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