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Point of No Return, Part IX

Monday, July 4, 2005

He's lost everything and everyone he's ever loved. Now he's faced with a choice: resist the urge for blood and rebuild his life, or descend deeper into that black madness, beyond the point of no return...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3893    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: This story is in no way meant to infringe on the rights of Joss Whedon, Universal Studios, Mutant Enemy, or 20th Century Fox. Just wanted to have a bit of fun with these characters is all. Please don’t sue me.

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Rated PG-13 for violence, graphic descriptions, and a few Chinese cuss words.

“Point of No Return, Part IX”

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Everything was gone. He had come into the light, but everything began to tremble and a moment later it was all gone. He was plunged once again into the blackness, even deeper than before.

“Come back…you have to come back…”

Her voice was more faint than ever. Sunyi…Wei…He strained to see their faces, but they were too far away, fading fast in the dark.

Only It was left. Its voice was strongest, drawing him ever closer to…he wasn’t sure, but he was lost. And afraid. And he couldn’t go back. He’d reached the point of no return. There was nothing more to do than surrender himself completely.

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Zoe’s silence was intense. Jayne glanced over to try to read her stony expression, but he couldn’t penetrate the stoic mask that fit tightly over her emotions. He never saw the fear that swelled in her throat, only the characteristic furrowed brow she made when she was angry or in deep thought. He gave up and turned back to the view before them.

After an hour of searching, they’d finally found Serenity, not too far out from where they’d first left her. She was spinning sideways in space, reminding Kaylee of the derelict they’d run across months ago. The ship was no longer moving under her own power. Electricity was gone; they could see that all the lights were out. The engine was still turning, though, and that meant life support was still online, likely running on auxiliary power. That was good. Serenity turned to reveal the scorches of Hera’s storms on her belly. Mal winced.

“We’re going in,” he finally said over the radio.

Comments
Monday, 04 July 2005 02:10
Nice, reaver ship huh? This should be interasting.
Monday, 04 July 2005 18:09
*Wode ma* this was ultra terrific and more than a mite creepifying! Very good and just begging for the next part. Please let Wash be okay! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 26 September 2005 16:21
Yikes. What a roller coaster. You're a fiend, you know that, right?

OMG - when River said "Found you" I was nearly crying with her. Everything seemed so bleak and hopeless at that point.

Excellent fight sequences, but it's the turning points you do so well. Hmm - ergo the series title, eh?

Brilliant. Applause

Only one more chapter. sulk

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