Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Blue Sun Rising - Part 1

Sunday, May 1, 2005

In celebration of the trailer and all the buzz. Written in shooting script format and set about a month after "Objects In Space." An old friend brings new problems.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2854    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Firefly, Serenity, and the original characters are not mine. This was written for fun, not profit. All standard disclaimers apply. Two new characters introduced in this series are mine, but Joss can have them if he wants, because they'd really like to come out and play.

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PG rating for this installment is for mild swearing only.

Pairings: Simom/Kaylee implied

CARGO BAY INTERIOR

LATE AFTERNOON

Mal, Zoë, and Jayne are loading fancy cargo crates onto a flatbed transport vehicle piloted by a uniformed man. An authoritative figure in business attire stands nearby going over a manifest with Simon, counting containers, running a portable x-ray type scanner over them, and then checking them off on the list. The crew is dressed in clothing they normally wouldn’t wear for work. They haven’t done laundry in a week, and haven’t had more than a sponge bath due to circumstances in a previous story. The cargo is loaded.

AUTHORITATIVE FIGURE: It's all here. I thank you for that.

Mal looks up, pissed. Simon eyes him and Mal backs off.

SIMON: (Slightly annoyed, cold, and formal) We are a business. You made us a fair deal, and we accepted it. I expect you chose this ship for a reason, so there is no cause to act as if you are surprised your cargo hasn’t been tampered with.

AUTHORITATIVE FIGURE: I am sorry. You are correct. We chose this ship (he looks around the cargo bay with disdain) very carefully. There have been many thefts from art shipments in this sector lately. (Slight condescension) The ships our regular carrier uses look as if they are transporting something of value. Yours, not so much.... I’m sorry to hear about your mechanical troubles, though I am glad they didn’t slow you at all. We will just deduct the price of the water and parts from your fee.

SIMON: Fair enough.

He hands Simon an envelope full of credits, Simon counts carefully as the transport is leaving the ship. Zoë hits the buttons to close the ramp and the airlock. Simon

Comments
Sunday, 01 May 2005 23:37
I like what you've got started here. I'm curious to find out more about Wash's sister. Hopefully, whatever reason she needed Wash to come to Harmony won't land the crew into too much trouble. But even if it does, I'm sure our BDH's can handle it.

Keep up the good work! =o)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 02 May 2005 00:13
please come up with more :)
Monday, 02 May 2005 15:19
Very good start, I am lapping this up. I really laughed at the notion of Simon and Mal 'giggling uncontrollably in a manly fashion'. I am intrigued as to where Simon knows Jenny from and how that will affect the landscape of what looks to be shaping up into a shiny story. Well done, keep up the good work - Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 02 May 2005 15:41
Thanks KaySky and AMDOBELL for the words of encouragement. I've actually been working on it for months so there is a lot more ready to go. I only got up the courage to post it after reading other great fan fic from folks like you!
Monday, 02 May 2005 17:43
You did good as well. I always thought of Wash as an only child. But to introduce someone who has ties with Wash and Simon pre-Serenity is a fascinating development. Small verse, ain't it.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 28 January 2006 18:46
*gasp*

Jenny?!?!?!

Right, okay, not clued in to why Simon knows Jenny yet. *giggle*

Great start, I can't wait to see more of this! =)

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