Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Blue Sun Rising - Part 10

Tuesday, June 7, 2005

Finding Common Ground
**Accidental spoilers for movie**

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3148    RATING: 10.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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**Spoilers** I accidently used a plot device from the movie, which I have not seen. I wrote this story long before I got spoiled, so I guess it was in the air. :)

Standard disclaimers apply. Firefly, Serenity, and the original characters are not mine. This was written for fun, not profit. Two new characters are mine, but Joss can have them if he wants because they really want to come out and play. Thanks to Ali D. for asking for Tom's perspective.

Archiving: Just let me know where.

Rating: PG

Pairings: None explict

PENAL MOON DETENTION FACILTY

CELL

NEXT MORNING

The cell is clean, well lit, and not too small. A largish window covered in a grid of laser beams looks out over a newly terraformed and fairly barren landscape. Tom Carlisle is sitting cross-legged on a bunk, which is chained to the wall. Tom is a tall, lanky man in his early 30s, with wavy brown hair, dark brown eyes, and a light tan. He’s dressed in a bright yellow prison jumpsuit, which is slightly too short, and sandals. He sits straight, with his back and head against the wall. His hands are folded in his lap; three fingers on his right hand are neatly splinted. His eyes are closed and there is a slight smile on his face, which is covered in bruises, some fading, and some fresh.

An official-looking man in a neat uniform (not Alliance) approaches the out side of the solid cell door, looks through the window at Tom, and hits a com button on his collar.

OFFICIAL: Open cell 28.

The door clicks and slides open just wide enough to admit the official. Tom doesn’t move a muscle except for an almost imperceptible twitch at the corner of his mouth. The official moves until he stands in front of Tom.

OFFICIAL: Good morning Mr. Carlisle. I hope you slept well. Your breakfast should be here soon, but I thought we could have a little chat first.

Tom opens his eyes slowly, but doesn’t move or speak.

OFFICIAL (cont.): You have had time to consider your options. Now, will you cooperate and be allowed to

Comments
Tuesday, 07 June 2005 02:38
Very nice, look foward to your next chapter.
Tuesday, 07 June 2005 07:01
I had a feeling where you were going with the Blue Sun dealings back in one of the first chapters...can't wait to see if we learn what Tom learned and why BS wants his source. (hint, hint...?)

Also, the River flying thing *wink* love it. Makes perfect sense. And Jayne trying to fit in and get along better with the "'us' vs 'them'" comment...I *heart* that!
Tuesday, 07 June 2005 11:37
Very good, wish it had been longer! River got very creepifying at the end making me worried for our Big Damn Heroes. Hope the next part is posted up soon. Ali D :~)
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