Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Blue Sun Rising - Part 12

Monday, December 26, 2005

Treachery is revealed in more ways than one, and Mal's scruples are tested.

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Standard disclaimers apply. This story was written for fun, not profit. No copyright infringement is intended.

Rating: PG for language and adult situations

Pairings: Kaylee/Simon; Wash/Zoe; Tom/Jenny.

AN: I left these guys hanging for far too long. It won't make much sense unless you read the rest of the story.

SOMEWHERE DARK AND CONCRETE

INTERIOR

Wash and Tom and lying on a bare concrete floor in a TV-dark, bunker-like room. They are just coming around from being out cold.

WASH: (Confused and groggy) What the...where are...? (Tentatively) Mal?….Niska?

TOM: (Less groggy, but just as confused) Just me, I think. (He tries to sit) Aaaagggghhh! (Then silence.)

WASH: Tom? (Terrified) You dead? Please don’t be dead!

TOM: (Whimpering) Not dead. Ribs…., lots of broken ribs. Where are we?

WASH: Don’t know.

TOM: So this wasn’t part of the plan.

WASH: (Fading) Uh uh.

TOM: Those men weren’t from the prison, unless they were out of uniform, which doesn’t make sense.

Wash doesn’t reply.

TOM: Wash, WASH!

WASH: (Very groggy) Sorry, passed out. Back of my head really hurts. Gotta concussion I think.

TOM: We need to stay awake. The terrible cotton mouth leads me to believe they doped us, but I think I remember them hitting you in the head too. (Humor in his voice) You were fighting pretty hard for a man who usually talks his way out of trouble. You bleeding?

WASH: I think I am. (beat) Yeah, a little.

TOM: I’m sorry I got you into this.

WASH: (A little slurred) You didn’t. Jenny did. S’okay though. S’what we do. On Serenity, it’s what we do…. S’okay ‘cause I love you.

TOM: (Laughing and then gasping in pain) You aren’t going to throw up, are you?

WASH: Heh?

TOM: Last time you told me you loved me you threw up.

WASH: I was drunk. You married my sister and I was really, really drunk. You’re my brother and I love you.

TOM: You do this often?

WASH: Tell men I love them?

TOM: No, rescue people, or try t

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 26 December 2005 23:01
Great to see another chapter of this, please don't let it be long until we get another and put in as much silee goodness as you can manage! :D
Tuesday, 27 December 2005 02:53
yeah. gotta agree with anon there. please please don't make us wait this long again.
it's just to exciting.
Thursday, 29 December 2005 00:14
"Last time you told me you loved me you threw up."

oh, it's been too long. far, far, far too long...

b
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 19:07
I just jumped on the Blue Sun Rising train. Way, way good. I found myself all caught up in it and couldn't stop reading. A true quality that even famous writers lack. I noticed that there were months between entries. Please don't do that to me. Fanfic is the only thing that keeps me going and the good ones (your's) are too far and few in between. Choo choo!!
Friday, 27 January 2006 05:57
I'm rather hooked on this story now. Having read every chapter this evening. Please continue. I'm a huge Simon/Kaylee fan and am enjoying all of their interaction very much!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 06 February 2006 03:54
I make very few comments- but I must tell you I am really enjoying this story!! The voices are spot on. Please finish it!
Tresta
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 06 February 2006 03:57
Cliomuse:
One small thing I noticed in the first part of this story. You have Wash call Jenny meimei -- even though he states she is his older sister. I am pretty certain that meimei means "baby sister". Likewise, I believe that ge-ge means "big brother". Might want to double check.

Otherwise, a terrific series.
Friday, 27 May 2011 12:51
Surely Mal wouldn't run slaves? Even under duress? Tell me he's planning to pull something...
Friday, 27 May 2011 12:53
Surely Mal wouldn't run slaves? Even under duress? Tell me he's planning to pull something...

Gorrammit, I never notice the dates! Was this story ever finished?

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