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Missing Scenes from OiS

Sunday, February 26, 2006

Just filling in a few blanks.

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A Missing Scene

A/N: When I watch Objects in Space I always ask myself, “Why did Simon change his shirt before surgery? Why is Kaylee wearing different pants?” And, “If Kaylee is so hot for Simon, why is she playing jacks in the cargo bay and joking around with River instead of haunting the infirmary?” This is my attempt at an answer. It also fits in with where the characters were headed before Blue Sun Rising .

Early hit Simon hard, much harder than Mal ever had. As he fell back he curled slightly and the metal steps bit, one-by-one, into his hips and back until his head hit with a resounding thunk. The pain was excruciating. River’s voice drifted out over the com and he willed himself not to black out as he struggled to sit up, to go after the hudan, but it was too late. The airlock clanked shut behind the bounty hunter.

Running on anger and adrenaline, Simon staggered to his feet, unsure of what to do, what he could do now. Someone was pounding on something, and there was a muffled shouting audible over the ringing in his ears. He shook his head to clear it, but the ringing got worse. The pounding got louder, metal on metal now, and he could distinguish Wash’s voice. Wash and Zoë were trapped in their bunk. Simon limped toward their door and noticed the red light next to it was on. Kaylee had explained the system to him once after she threatened to lock Jayne in his bunk.

Simon called out, “What’s the code?”

Wash’s reply was muffled by the thick metal door, “Hit 09265 and the unlock key.”

He dragged himself to the keypad. His fingers left streaks of red on the buttons. There was a loud click, then a clang, and Wash and Zoë spilled out of their door. Zoë was at his side instantly, a good field medic assessing the damage. She was easing him back toward the floor when the airlock opened and boots appeared on the ladder. Simon started to shout to Wash to get out of the way, but he saw the suit. It was one of Serenity’s own. Its wearer reached up to help another, smalle

Comments
Sunday, 26 February 2006 18:29
Oh, this was an excellent scene that I would have loved to see at the end of OiS. Kaylee and Simon needed a moment at the end darnit!

I hope you keep writing! Your stuff is very enjoyable to read.
Sunday, 26 February 2006 18:31
That was excellent, Clio! I wondered what happened in the little bits we never got to see, and I love your insight. I think you should continue this a little bit later on, Simon seeing how Kaylee's doing after everything.

Excellent!
Sunday, 26 February 2006 19:02
Shiny, always love it when we get the missing Simon/Kaylee sceenes :D
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 26 February 2006 19:18
S/K missing scenes are always great. I always thought that the writers were somewhat hit or miss on the whole thing, failing to insert scenes where one would be called for (See "Out of Gas" for a glaring example. "We're all cuddly on Canton, but as soon as the ship explodes and we're all gonna die we don't even make eye contact." Yes, I look for these things. I am odd.)

Anyway, rant aside, this is an excellent handling of why Kaylee (and River) aren't glued to the windows of the infirmary.

P.S. I never notice they changed clothes. Cool!
Sunday, 26 February 2006 21:06
Wow you people are observant! Can I also point out that this is the second fic in as many days to pick up on the change of clothing. I need to start paying more attention.

I like the little bit about the door code and leaving blood on the buttons. It feels like that would be a significant camera shot, or maybe i'm just morbid like that!

Good stuff,
Taya
Sunday, 26 February 2006 21:27
Thanks everyone. *blushes* There are so many great fics coming out these days, many of which have been penned (penned? keyed? whatever) by folks whose comments are above. This has been sitting around on my computer for a long while. Blue Sun Rising has me completely stuck. I had written this and some other "insight" pieces to try to get the characters to where they are at the beginning of BSR. I might have to edit and upload Kaylee and Simon's internal musings for the K/S crowd. It includes their takes on all the things that happened between them after OiS, including the above scene told from both perspectives.
Sunday, 26 February 2006 22:41
>I might have to edit and upload Kaylee and Simon's internal musings for the K/S crowd

Yes, please....I can beg... There can never be enough S/K fic.

I'm working on one that is currently 104 pages long...it was originally going to be a fluffy smutfilled piece that decided it wanted a plot...*insert swear words here*

Please keep writing and I'll definitely keep reading!
Monday, 27 February 2006 04:22
Leiasky, I should hire you to write my smut!
Monday, 27 February 2006 16:12
>Leiasky, I should hire you to write my smut!

Oh god no, please! I like reading everyone elses!

Will you have some for us in the near future....? :)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 February 2006 16:35
I don't know how much or how soon. I create stuff for a living (museum exhibits) so a lot of my energy gets expended at work. Hence the lack of Blue Sun Rising. I'll see if I can make the internal musings readable. There is some smut.

Cliomuse
Monday, 27 February 2006 17:39
I absolutely love Blue Sun Rising. For some reason, I thought it was done tho'?! There's more to it?

Oy, just what I need, to start begging someone else for more stories! Hee

Monday, 27 February 2006 21:57
Yeah, I gotta rescue the boys (Wash and Tom) and figure out how Mal gets away with the whole "human cargo" issue.
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 00:21
>Yeah, I gotta rescue the boys (Wash and Tom) and figure out how Mal gets away with the whole "human cargo" issue.

Ohh, that's right. Well, I hope you'll give us some more Simon and Kaylee goodness in it too :)
Sunday, 09 April 2006 16:59
aww...missing K/S moments rock!!! but a sweet and fluffy kind of rock

b

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