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Schism part 5: DELIVERANCE

Friday, April 22, 2005

It's time to face your fears...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4308    RATING: 10.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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This is the final instalment of The Schism series. It's also the hardest story I've ever written.

A special thanks goes to Channain for providing much needed beta support. THANK YOU!

A huge thanks goes to AmDoBell, Guildsister, Phaedra and SoulOfSerenity for supporting this crazy story arc from day one. I wouldn't be writing this story without your kind words and support. Hopefully all your questions have been answered!

In the immortal words of Evil Dead's Bruce Campbell: "Finish it!" :)

DISCLAIMER: The Firefly characters and locations featured in this work of fiction are the property of Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy Inc and Twentieth Century Fox Film Corporation. I'm just borrowing them for a while. (No breach of copyright intended.)

The following work of fiction contains scenes of graphic horror, violence and scenes of an adult nature that some Browncoats may find offensive.

This story is rated R.

~ Prelude ~

PERSPECTIVE: Jayne

Jayne Cobb slowly crouched into position beside a large cargo container. He propped the barrel of his gun, Vera, against the lid and aimed it towards the cargo bay door. He’d been waiting for what seemed like an eternity.

“Gorram it! What’s takin‘ them so long?!” he hissed.

Mal popped his head up from behind a barrel across the room. “Give them time.” he called. “Reavers know what they’re doing. They’ll want to take it easy. Check their surroundings. They’ll send someone to scout the area first."

“Makes more sense just stormin’ the place, if you ask me.” Jayne grumbled.

“Well, I ain’t.” Mal replied. “Remember, we shoot on sight. Don’t want any of these things reaching Inara’s shuttle.”

Jayne nodded and moved back into place. Seconds passed into minutes. Minutes passed into hours. Jayne snorted. The captain was right. Gorramn Reavers were taking their time. Mid-bulk transport filled with nine, tasty, human sized snacks on board and they were nowhere in sight.

“Dumb-ass Reavers…” he muttered

Suddenly the airlock handle tw

Comments
Friday, 22 April 2005 18:03
Oh, spooky chilling horrific gorram Reavers! Yikes, now we'll all have rutting nightmares of those twisted *wangba dans* coming up through Serenity's grating and the walls and floors of our houses... Gulp! Very fine if scary myth, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 27 April 2005 17:31
God I love unhappy endings. This was beautifully disturbing. Thank you for finishing up this series. This is the End. Right?
Monday, 02 May 2005 19:34
Aaarrgggghhhh!!!!! Of course, you just had to end it without really ending it, didn't you. This was good stuff, Cos!

- Soul
Thursday, 15 September 2005 19:08
OH MY F*CKING GOD!!!!! *slaps face* sorry, it's just...wow. beyond words right now

b
Tuesday, 16 May 2006 13:52
"Mal raised his eyebrows. It had been a long, damn while since Zoe had disagreed with any of his plans." Great line, utterly in character for these two and it needed to be said.

"Beneath the cargo bay floor, several pairs of eyes stared out from the black. Slender fingers pushed their way up through the grating." Evil, wicked, crafty Reavers laying quietly in wait even after one of their number is given a dirt nap by River. Shite, CF, you do this stuff VERY well. I've got a bit of the shivers still. Nicely nicely done, Man. Am grateful you gave the link in chat the other day.
Thursday, 18 May 2006 17:36
I love how you work in things from the episodes, different things that are mentioned. I also like how you mentioned the 3 switches that Wash talks about on the DVD extras. SHINY!

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