Blue Sun Room GRAPHICS - IMAGES
Mal Reynolds Pencil Sketch.
Friday, March 21, 2008
Constructive feedback is appreciated. This is a first attempt. It's been a while since I've contributed Firefly artwork. Go easy on me guys.
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Friday, 21 March 2008 18:09
excellent job, cos. i always enjoy seeing what you put up! :]
keep it coming!
keep it coming!
Friday, 21 March 2008 20:59
Well, you asked for constructive criticism, so I'll give it with a disclaimer. This is way better than I could do myself.
The left side of his face is a bit smaller than the right. I know it was probably because of perspective, but I think it's a bit too much. Also, his right eye is darker than his left, and not quite pointed in the same direction.
The chin is right on, as are the mouth and nose. The hair is quite good as well. You also did quite well with the skin and cloth textures.
Overall, very nice.
The left side of his face is a bit smaller than the right. I know it was probably because of perspective, but I think it's a bit too much. Also, his right eye is darker than his left, and not quite pointed in the same direction.
The chin is right on, as are the mouth and nose. The hair is quite good as well. You also did quite well with the skin and cloth textures.
Overall, very nice.
Friday, 21 March 2008 21:06
Anyone who can draw with your skill needs no constructive critism, thats fantastic! Wish I could draw like you!
Saturday, 22 March 2008 16:40
That's great! I love the little lift of his right eyebrow. So Mal!
I love the way it is definately Mal, but that you can feel the artists hand in it. (small crit: seems there should be more space between his eyes and the top of his head, but he still has that nice strong hero head.) I also like how you did the high- and low-lights.
Great work!
I love the way it is definately Mal, but that you can feel the artists hand in it. (small crit: seems there should be more space between his eyes and the top of his head, but he still has that nice strong hero head.) I also like how you did the high- and low-lights.
Great work!
Sunday, 23 March 2008 23:34
Great job!
Your shading and highlights are fantastic.
You asked for feedback so here goes, but remember that I'm detail obsessed and your piece is still wonderful.
His mouth and nose aren't quite centered along the same line. I also think you could move the eyes and nose down a little bit on the head so he has a smaller space between his nose and mouth and a slightly larger forhead. Maybe move the ear down just a tad. Also, I think his eyes are looking in slightly different directions.
Your shading and highlights are fantastic.
You asked for feedback so here goes, but remember that I'm detail obsessed and your piece is still wonderful.
His mouth and nose aren't quite centered along the same line. I also think you could move the eyes and nose down a little bit on the head so he has a smaller space between his nose and mouth and a slightly larger forhead. Maybe move the ear down just a tad. Also, I think his eyes are looking in slightly different directions.
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