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Stay - Part III

Friday, September 12, 2003

Mal, Jayne and Kaylee are working on a heist aboard a cruiseship. They realize their undercover job might be jeopardized by Inara, who happens to be sailing in the same ship with one of her clients.

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Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, I just borrow them for fun.

Acknowledgements: A very, very, very special thanks to TZEGHA. She has been my muse throughout the story and her feedback has been priceless all along. Thank you for pushing me to do my best. You are a great beta.

“Stay” – PART III

The moment the ship started rocking Jayne broke into a cold sweat, Kaylee had noticed.

The ocean was hit by a powerful storm that evening, making most of the people on board retreat into their cabins early feeling seasick and Jayne was no exception. Not even the aquatic anti-gravity fields had been able to stop the boat from swaying with the storm. The mercenary had brought a bottle of water from his cabin, and as far as she knew, that had been his only intake since the small sandwich he ate at lunchtime. Not that he had been able to keep it down for long—not even a full box of Dramamine had done the trick this time.

The three of them were now at the honeymoon suite going over the details of the job. Mal had been very quiet and withdrawn—much more than usual, she observed. He had told them about his visit to the showroom earlier, but he had been brief and to the point. Almost cryptic, even by Mal’s standards. When she had asked him about the stone itself he had just shrugged and dismissed it as ‘just an old jade rock’.

The Captain was leaning over a ship’s map that had been projected over the coffee table, and seemed to be focusing his attention on the different scenarios of the heist. Even though he kept tracing his fingers over the route, his mind appeared to be elsewhere, his eyes sometimes unfocused for a while over a random spot on the map. Kaylee noticed how he blinked and frowned every time this happened, trying to bring his mind back on track. She wanted to wrap her arms around one of his and make him tell her what was wrong, just as he had done to her the day they boarded the ship, but she knew better. Mal didn’t work that way and the last thing she wanted to do right now was a

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 12 September 2003 16:24
*ack!*

*gasp*

don't you dare kill off my cappy!

Friday, 12 September 2003 17:35
Help! Tamade, you can't let him die, you can't! The 'verse will never be the same without him and what will we all do??? Weep, wail, sounds of terrible heartbreak and distress... You have to write another piece. I like the way you had Jayne turn up and nail Jason, saving Kaylee from having to take a life. This whole story is superb, all we need now is a way to bring our Captain back. Sigh. I'll be holding my breath until you do, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 12 September 2003 17:52
For the love of god, you can't leave it there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this please continue SOON. :)
Friday, 12 September 2003 18:17
Hi guys,

I am working on the epilogue. It will reach your nearest Fireflyfans.net stand soon. ;-)

Goldenthorn74
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 12 September 2003 20:06
I hope so because this chapter of the story was so good that at this present moment, I absolutely hate Inara because the Cap'n is laying in a pool of his own blood because of her!!!
Agghh!!! AAAhhhh!!!!! I could spit!

Whew!, Damn good chapter Goldenthorn, it really evoked a lot of emotion from me. I'm pretty pissed about the Cap'n state...I gotta get a smoke.

Great chapter!!
TY
Friday, 12 September 2003 20:07
Gorramit! This is Ty I just posted the above message and I hope this falls under it.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 12 September 2003 23:30
BC

Mal dead. Not Mal. Not after finding out how Inara feels about him. No!!!!!!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 23 September 2003 13:54
Please write more! Really enjoyed the story.

Mal'd not really dead, right?

Right?
Thursday, 30 March 2006 23:34
Oh, for God's sake, I'm begging you, DON'T CUT OFF THERE!!!
Sunday, 14 May 2006 05:53
*howls* Maaaal! Races off rapidly to next chapter....

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