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Stay - Part II

Thursday, August 7, 2003

Mal, Jayne and Kaylee are working on a heist aboard a cruise ship. They realize their undercover job might be jeopardized by Inara, who happens to be sailing in the same ship with one of her clients.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4182    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, I just borrow them for fun.

Acknowledgements: A very, very, very special thanks to TZEGHA. She has been my muse throughout the story and her feedback has been priceless all along. Thank you for pushing me to do my best. You are a great beta.

“Stay” – PART II

Silently, sheltered by the penumbra, he had been observing her, waiting in the shadows like a predator pursuing its prey. It was getting late and she had barely moved from the same spot by the outer railing facing the sea in nearly an hour.

He could see her profile from where he was standing under the stairway. She seemed lost in thought, her face grim with tears streaming freely down her cheeks. He wondered why she had been rubbing her right wrist, her face twisted inward with what looked like pain, maybe anger. The cool evening air made her shiver slightly and he saw her wrap her thin shawl around her shoulders.

Unaware of the attentive presence in the shadows, Inara found herself consumed by the agony of her last conversation with Mal. His words pierced through her mind and she was unable to stop their incessant ringing in her ears.

I’ve already let you go.

It was precisely what she had wanted—exactly what she needed. Why did it hurt so much then? Just hearing him say those words had felt like somebody had snapped her last hanging thread making her fall into a dark abyss with nothing to hold on to.

It was the point of no return—the door back to Serenity had been permanently closed.

She turned around with a heavy sigh, her face composed, cool, as if she hadn't been blinded by tears only moments before. It was then when she caught a glimpse of a man leaning against the wall by the stairs leading to the upper deck, quietly and unquestionably observing her.

She began walking towards the stranger who was now moving away, still unable to make out his features in the darkness.

With a mixture between uneasiness and curiosity she followed him, lifting her long ski

Comments
Thursday, 07 August 2003 19:08
Excellent but oh the pain of unrequited love! Poor Mal. In this one it is almost like seeing Kaylee's coming of age as she seems to acquire a wisdom beyond her years at the price of her niavete. Very well written, painfully angsty in places and building up the tension nicely. Well done! Can't wait for part 3. Ali D
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Friday, 08 August 2003 11:01
Guess who has become my fav fanfic writer. Great story esp love the Mal & Inara `ship. Can`t wait for next part.You rock!!!
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Friday, 15 August 2003 15:46
Wow! Awesome! Loved it! Can´t wait for the next part. Please hurry!
Sunday, 14 May 2006 05:45
Wow, I love this story. You write them so well, especially Mal and Kaylee, and your scene between Mal and Inara in the bar was beautiful and heartbreaking.

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