Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Eidolon (Chapter 32)

Thursday, July 19, 2012

The officer crossed his arms, looking back at the Reaver woman as she silently watched them, two predators stalking their prey, like mirrors to each other. "If it were up to me, I'd have them all shot and the bodies burned." (The wretched)

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The central hanger was clean and featureless as to be expected. If he had his preferences, he might have more appreciated the functional and striking aesthetic of the open view from the transparent airlocks of a carrier, the long walkway floating among the stars. Perhaps. If he hadn't been raised in a claustrophobic underground complex.

Two officers were waiting at attention in the mostly empty space, standing a distance specified in an operating procedure manual appropriate for the circumstance and the docking code used. A blonde traffic controller in her greys. The other, Captain Teram Baker, a man built like a marine in a grey naval uniform; tall, lean, square jaw, and a brown regulation haircut with somewhat flinty eyes. The Operative approached them.

"Ensign," he acknowledged. She processed his identification with an attitude that could only be described as politely bored, and almost managed mild surprise when she saw his full security clearance. She hesitantly saluted, and he inwardly sighed at the all-too-familiar confusion. "I have no rank," he explained to her, before she could attempt to ask. "Nor any name, and you would be advised, after this conversation, to consider that I am a figment of your imagination." Little more than a shadow, easily forgotten, and if what he'd heard about this facility was accurate, everyone stationed here was heavily modified and could be remote wiped or commanded as necessary. Parliament was very serious about controlling dangerous information and security leaks, and almost as serious about not wasting any more resources than they had to.

"O-of course," she answered, dubiously, and carefully swallowed the 'sir' that she was trained to add. She exchanged a look and a nod with her supervisor, and was dismissed. They none of them had any idea how easily they could disappear.

He was on the clock now. Nine hours from that reading, a notification from over the cortex would reach the citadel on Londinium, confirm

Comments
BYTEMITE
Thursday, 19 July 2012 01:57
A bit of clarification in here about Pax - I think Reaver victims act like Reavers themselves because the experience gives them pretty severe PTSD. Keep in mind as you read.
BYTEMITE
Thursday, 19 July 2012 16:07
I also have to give a nod to Anothersky, I still get ideas and themes for Riverspeak from her Albatross story.
Thursday, 19 July 2012 19:24
Poor Mal, not only in the thick of it but being treated like a Reaver. Wow, that is beyond bad. And I could shake Inara here. I'm hoping the Operative will be able to help, while our valiant crew have to get ready to fight no doubt for their lives again. Ali D
"You can't take the sky from me!"
BYTEMITE
Thursday, 19 July 2012 19:35
Yeah, plus he's got all that psychological trauma going on from the first time around.

Shake Inara? Why? She's actually got a good point. Or rather, River has a good point that she discussed with Inara, and Inara is voicing it. Zoe isn't making any decisions at this point, she's struggling too much with her own sense of loss over Wash to be objective. Inara's willing to make a decision, and she has the least to lose here.

Not that it'll make any difference. TheEey're heEere...

The Operative is very helpful. Help them right off a cliff...

BYTEMITE
Thursday, 19 July 2012 19:41
On the other hand, when I had that least exchange in the next chapter before I moved it here, Zoe did grit her teeth and think about shaking Inara herself... And while Zoe's reasoning is off, it IS genre savvy to not split the party.

And then Inara's all kinda like oh noes gotta go sacrifice for my luuuurve, which kinda got them into this mess with Mal in the first place.

So, okay, point.
Monday, 13 August 2012 03:21
Things look bad as Mal is referred to as "the leader of a terrorist cell" and is put "with the other Reavers." Aaack. I liked also these sentences: "the new impossible situation the small-time freighter crew had gotten themselves into. Their ability to appear at the center of chaos was nothing short of astonishing." And especially this exchange: "Is he the purpose of your visit?" The less said about his intentions the better. -- that not only highlights the Operative's purpose, it also hearkens back to Jubal Early, wanting not to have his intentions visited, and gives this scene a little extra creepy edge. River's pronouncements about "sunrise" smacks of foreshadowing. "and apart from all the thievin' and explosions and shoot outs he ain't even done anythin' wrong." -- leave it to Kaylee to say this without the least irony!
BYTEMITE
Monday, 13 August 2012 14:07
Oh yeah, especially considering what Zoe says that Mal escaped from in regards to the Ratched. But he went into the Alliance camp anyway, even knowing that might happen to him again.

The Alliance Captain has all these memories...

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