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Eidolon (Chapter 13)

Friday, August 19, 2011

A ballet, solemn as a temple dance, that only she knew. Dressed in bleached linen, she glowed in the cold moonlight nearly as much as her partners, a ghostly mirror to them as she meandered, then bowed low every few steps in an arabesque. (Life)

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Normally, he would have been looking after his sister. She had been upset about the crew leaving, and finally had calmed down enough only minutes before to insist they go outside, some sort of claustrophobic whim having taken hold of her. For him to deny her anything that might be some relief for her distress was unthinkable.

The outpost was quiet, a few villagers standing around chatting, gathering wayward children or watching their play indulgently, but most had already retired into the tunnels under the domiciles for the night.

Day and night, they all took turns watching their flocks or staying behind with the children. The rotation of shifts was comfortable, even routine, and sometimes he could almost forget that even here, they carried guns everywhere no matter what the job.

He hadn't thought of the others much, his attention needed as a doctor and brother. Now he was reminded acutely. Bovine , River had proclaimed, peering oddly, unfathomable and knowing. He'd decided not to ask, and his poor Ophelia had danced off after - or perhaps with - the fireflies that had emerged from the tall grass. Some sort of ballet, solemn as a temple dance, that only she knew. Dressed in bleached linen, she glowed in the cold moonlight nearly as much as her partners, a ghostly mirror to them as she meandered, then bowed low every few steps in an arabesque.

Zoë was left a radio instead of rue. After overhearing River's transmission, the soldier had sharpened into an intensely focused state. She reminded him of the tiger banners hung all over Capital City four years ago on yuándàn .

"Sir?" she hailed. Some small amount of concern broke through her stoicism. Hadn't she been arguing with the captain earlier? She didn't forgive easily; Niska's fate, both times storming his complex was an example of her wrath. Yet Mal seemed a special exemption, or perhaps the deference was just professionalism.

No answer. Simon climbed to his feet. "What's going

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Friday, 19 August 2011 19:55
Gonna be about a week's gap in updating. See you all around September 2nd.
Friday, 19 August 2011 23:12
Uh-oh, where has River gone while Simon was talking to Zoe?
Zoe pregnancy certainly seems to be a theme here with recent Firefly fics. Four months? And she really didn't notice? And here I thought I was pushing the limits of credibility when I had her three months along before confirming it in my story. Ah, well, I suppose in your story line, she's even more distressed, abstracted and deeper in denial. And definitely angrier. It all fits. :-)
Saturday, 20 August 2011 00:03
Well the thing about sickness is true, some people don't get it, and women only really start to show at 3 to 4 months, so it may not be noticeable at first.

The main clue most women have is their monthly cycle, but when someone's frame is as thin and lean as Zoe, it isn't always regular.

But yes, the only reason I could push it to four months is only if she didn't have any morning sickness. And yeah, she has been distracted.
Saturday, 20 August 2011 12:37
I hope River hasn't got herself in any trouble. Pleased that Simon was on the ball in realising that Zoe was pregnant and all of Zoe's responses were totally in character. I liked the way you expressed her thoughts and hope all goes well at Mal's end so our little dysfunctional family can be reunited again. But where oh where is River? Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Thursday, 01 September 2011 23:05
I'm setting you up for something anti-climactic in regards to River, I'm afraid, but that in itself sets up for something else.

Also it's important to recognize that I was never planning to have a Zoe baby story arc, and I threw this in at the last minute after receiving new information. That's the thing about writing as slow as I do, sometimes canon is confirmed or changed before I get a chance to post. On the other hand, at least I'm usually pretty good at KEEPING canon because of it.

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