Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Eidolon (Chapter 9)

Friday, July 15, 2011

Their surroundings were no less hot even for the shade and mist dripping from the hardy ferns. Oh, she had a headache. Climate control, she encouraged herself faintly. The shuttles have climate control. (Heat)

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She followed the quiet murmurs through the excavated halls, trailing her hand along the sandy walls and trying to settle her feelings. Not thinking about Mal was best, not thinking about the fluttering that resulted whenever something like civility passed between them. That wouldn't last, it never did.

Unfortunately, without any other distraction, her anxiety from when she had woken up returned. Her dreams the night before had been troubled, a product of unfamiliar surroundings. She forced some confidence into her steps, focused on her teachings, the sensuality of her heightened senses, the feeling of the earth under her fingers. She had never been afraid of the dark and she certainly wasn't about to start now.

"Kaylee?" she called, and the two voices went quiet for a moment that her nerves drummed up again. The muttering started anew, and she was able to catch something that sounded like ' don't go, stay ' and ' cant, capn already formed a search party .' Some fabric rustled, one of the two gave a low groan, and they fell quiet again for a suspicious amount of time. " Méi méi ?" she tried again, uncertain.

"Be right out!" her friend finally answered, and Inara had a fairly good idea that she had interrupted something she hadn't wanted to. Regardless, Kaylee skipped out into the hallway with no complaints and her usual sunniness, pulling up one of the straps of her coveralls. "Ain't doin' engine diagnostics on an empty stomach," she announced, tugging at Inara's arm.

A short trip revealing that the tunnels underneath the sandstone domes on the surface were all connected, and they emerged into a large hall under a vaulted ceiling, lit by eyelets carved geometrically into the cupola. This was where all the villagers were, Inara realized, bustling around intricately woven rugs laid across the floor for sitting and a buffet of homemade bread and cereal grains out on what appeared to normally serve

Comments
Friday, 15 July 2011 23:43
Cliffhanger. Fortunately, there aren't many of these.
Saturday, 16 July 2011 01:17
Exciting cliffhanger!
Painful watching Mal and Inara not quite connecting. Good work.
I especially enjoyed the description of Gramma Hani.
Saturday, 16 July 2011 01:22
A truce never lasts long between them.

I've had some ideas about a possibility later on that we might see this village again, though I haven't decided yet whether to go with that or some other options.
Monday, 18 July 2011 00:34
could only read the first part. but I like millet-cakes. and weeping buddhas.

your dialogue is improving.

:)
Monday, 18 July 2011 02:19
I hope so...

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