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Eidolon (Chapter 7)

Sunday, July 3, 2011

The power grid had shut down some time ago, shortly before Alliance command had called for a complete quarantine, and since they had come down to investigate, they had heard nothing. No local chatter, no response even from the teams they had sent out. No noise, from a city of millions, in the middle of the day. (Interruption)

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Fire sputtered among the wreckage in the road, barely enough to make out ruined walls and architectural shells. The clear sky seemed to be siphoning the heat from the desert into the black, and crouching behind the makeshift barricades was shivering misery.

One of the two teens, tall, thin, and swarthy, crossed his arms and pulled his tan linen robe tighter. He shifted, trying to hold in some warmth and to find some position against the junk pile that wouldn't give him tetanus. His brown eyes were staring, short black hair hidden by keffiyeh . "Have they gone?" He muttered out of the side of his mouth, gritting his teeth.

The other peeked out over the top of their cover, looking like his companion but for a broader nose, firmer jaw, and stockier build. A few deadly crimson beams sought them out, and his partner dragged him back down. " Ittakil al Allah !" he yelled, "Go away! I need to piss and I want to sleep!"

Renewed laserfire answered him. "You forgot hungry," his friend observed wearily.

A flurry of bombs and shuttles had descended on the cityscape hours ago, timed to the second that the Georgian sun dropped below the horizon. Like clockwork, colouring everything twilight purple.

The space port had been entirely cleared, except, it seemed, for them. Once the invaders secured the area, they started building, scurrying around to set up some of the largest mounted guns either of them had ever seen. Glittering black-scaled cables radiated from the complicated-looking newtech like a forest of vile trees taking root.

"You think your little brother found a way through?" The outfit patrolling the streets were numerous, well-trained, and well-armed.

Some strange cross between wistful, proud, and grim, bitter memories of slavery and helplessness raged behind the cheeky reply. "Just fine. Niska's best greaseman, years of experience, and the ghabi haiwan don't have half a brain between them."

The quieter of

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Sunday, 03 July 2011 18:21
Hmm...By the mention of Dr Carron, should I presume this part of the story is set before the events of the movie? Or is the whole series set before the movie and I just missed registering that somehow? (Now it's my turn to feel a bit dense ;-) ) I'm still finding this story quite interesting, mind you, and I'm sure the next part will tie things in with our BDH's a bit more. Especially liked the first section, great scene-setting. You can almost see and taste and smell it.
Sunday, 03 July 2011 22:27
I wondered about the timeline as well. Well written if bleak just as you would expect with the Reavers loose and hungry. Ali D
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 03 July 2011 23:52
Flashback. I know good authors don't use flashbacks, and try to keep the story moving in a forwards direction, but this was necessary.

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