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February

Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Well dost thou, Love, thy solemn Feast to hold, in vestal February. Blossoming and the first shift in the winds on Serenity.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4599    RATING: 10.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Joss is the primary inspiration, and owns everything. But I also have to give some credit to GillianRose and Alexis Machine for their infirmary scenes; I had to do one of my own after reading them, and I confess there’s similarities.

A lot of other ideas and references came together for this, as well, so it might be all over the place. Starts a little weird and probably rambles a bit, but I hope you’ll enjoy.

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He’d been riding up sunbeams on horseback and very appreciative of morphine when a wind howled into existence and he opened his eyes to the cold beyond, confused.

The hell was this? Didn’t recall his Ma as having a river cascading to her shoulders, or being quite so frail looking. The phantom’s stare was wild, and a new chill crept onto the battlefield. Witches, he remembered, who spoke good and terrifying in the same breath and knew the future. The wraith pressed a prophesy into his hand, then departed like a breath, sent her three shadows to swallow him.

Later he woke again to Simon’s fussing and managed to recognize his own infirmary. His fingers were curled around a wrapped piece of melted candy. “Outta lollipops?” he slurred. His brain felt like it was stuck to the roof of his mouth.

The doctor looked up from the sorting that apparently couldn’t wait until grumpy captains weren’t trying to sleep, and smiled upon realizing what he was talking about. The former core dweller took the colourful little deformed ball from his patient, rolling it around in his hands nostalgically. “Back on Osiris, River used to get cards and candy for all of her classmates on Valentine’s Day.”

He felt too old to tell the younger man that he was too old for that. “How’d she get real chocolate, anyway?” The medical genius’s sentimental expression grew slightly troubled, thinking over the only real conclusion, and after a few seconds his own slowed faculties caught up. “She stole ‘em,” he grinned sleepily, an unexpected moment of pride,

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Tuesday, 08 February 2011 06:47
Another one. The main page hasn't refreshed yet, but it's been a week... Hope no one minds. I wanted to be able to repost Remembrance on Valentine's Day, and I might have something new then to go with it too.
Tuesday, 08 February 2011 22:56
Wow, I love this so much Bytemite. Thank you for posting it. You have the characters so beautifully drawn and your insight with Inara and Mal is breathtaking. Lovely vocabulary too. A shiny gift, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Tuesday, 08 February 2011 23:12
This story and the next one I'll be posting are my favourite pieces of writing I've ever done. I try hard to meet the same quality in every work I've done since, and always seem to fall short.

Thanks for reading anyway. :)
Wednesday, 09 February 2011 03:12
Perfect. Simply perfect. Perfectly written, described, characterized and verbalized. Can't wait for the next installment!
Wednesday, 09 February 2011 03:57
I could be accused of an overdose of imagery, of course, and being a little too into the poetics for a character like Mal. I eventually start to scale that back to be more in keeping with the actual character.

With Inara, though, I still let myself go nuts on that. Your mileage may vary on whether it's faithful to the characters.
Wednesday, 09 February 2011 04:21
One of my favorites, B.

Thanks for reposting.

Is there a part two? I seem to remember a companion piece?
Wednesday, 09 February 2011 04:26
Yep, posting next week. :)

"Companion" piece. :D
Saturday, 07 May 2011 00:00
how can one not wax poetic about cappy? love it. And a drugged Mal is kinda funny in its own way.
Friday, 13 May 2011 16:09
I might complain about my tendency to go to far... but I do think Mal may have an internal monologue that has a little poetry to it, kinda like film noir narrative, that comes out now and then in some of his more pretty captainy speeches.

The drugs only make him more whimsical.

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