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A Midnight Clear (3/5)

Saturday, January 3, 2009

Continuing the Christmas story (sorry for the delay!). Mal and Inara make a date.

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Title: A Midnight Clear, part three of five

Authors: gilliebeans and charlie_bz

Description: Mal and Inara make a date.

Rating: This one is approaching R territory.

Disclaimer: Characters aren’t ours.

Authors’ Note: Sorry for the delay! Holiday festivities impeded with our holiday story.

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"Because I wanted you to kiss me." The words hung in the cold air. Inara gazed at Mal, clear eyed, allowing her eyes to show more of her than she had ever shown another person. Everything was different. She couldn’t keep herself from touching him so she contented herself with rearranging his scarf, wanting to prolong their physical contact in whatever manner available.

“You did, did you?” Mal’s head dipped down closer to hers. His voice was soft, intimate. Devastatingly sexy. Oh, Gods, the man could kiss. She was dizzy from it, dizzy and overheated even out here in the snow, and she desperately wanted another. She tried to remember that Serenity was close, the crew even closer, but she was irresistibly drawn to him.

"I did." Watching him smile, this new smile over their secret, wasn't something she was getting tired of anytime soon. She would tarry over the scarf, she decided. She needed an excuse to linger, didn’t want to leave the cold winter night for the comfort of Serenity. It was some consolation to her that he seemed just as reluctant to move as her but the sounds of the crew grew closer.

She shrugged, smiling at him. She patted the front of his scarf. "Shall we?"

It hit her, cold and merciless, forcing her eyes closed with the shock. The sting traveled harshly down her neck, across her scalp and into her ear. Inara gasped, heard Mal's roar of outrage. And another voice, familiar even through the snow that had filled her ear.

"Oh, God, Inara! I'm so sorry!" Simon had sprinted up to her, following the trajectory of his fatally misthrown snowball.

She nodded, scooping wet snow out of her collar. Mal stepped closer, wrapping his arm around

Comments
Saturday, 03 January 2009 21:14
You added another part, I notice. :)

Oh that River.

I like that Wash and Book will be included. I think they'd be there anyway in some spirit, but they'd also appreciate the acknowledgement.
Saturday, 03 January 2009 23:20
I think I was just as frustrated as Mal and Inara when River interrupted them. River and her schedule for the party made me laugh, it is so like something I can see her doing. It's good that they will be remembering Wash and Book as well, after all, they are family too. This little series is lovely. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 04 January 2009 00:44
Add another person to the frustrated. River's timing was perfect and her tears for Wash and Book.....
Sunday, 04 January 2009 13:29
I already commented over at Fanfiction.net but I had to add a lovely little 10 over here too. Beautiful work!
WOONSOCKET
Monday, 05 January 2009 02:38
These have all been lovely. Such delicate pussy-footing. And River's planning and confusion were great.
Monday, 05 January 2009 03:48
very nicely written - all the characters have life. And some very good descriptions too; Garnet - what a lovely word! :)

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