Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

A Midnight Clear (2/5)

Tuesday, December 23, 2008

Mal and Inara, making plans for Christmas Eve. A Christmas Collaborative fic from Gilliebeans and CharlieBZ

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3291    RATING: 10.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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They sat in the farthest seat for a while, having been directed there by the ancient little man Mal had hired to take them home. He had an apparently complicated seating plan that Inara watched him refer to several times, although the light was so dim she couldn’t imagine him making out the writing. Still, he greeted the sparse number of passengers with explicit directions on where each was to ride in the carriage. Others sought out the old driver as well, but not for a ride. Instead, they handed over bulky packages and bags, with slips of paper presumably serving as delivery instructions. Each time, the man ran his thumb over the paper, then stashed it carelessly in his pocket as he hopped up into different benches, stowing his cargo with faithful attention to his plan.

Inara turned to Mal in amusement. "Why does this not surprise me?"

"Care to expound on whatever you find so entertaining?"

She lowered her voice to a teasing whisper and leaned closer. "Of all the ways to get us home, you see fit to pick the most...leisurely conveyance possible. What grudge do you have against the transpo shuttle? We'd be at Serenity in 15 minutes!"

"Transpo's left. You were shopping."

" We were shopping," she admonished lightly, accepting the thermos Mal offered. "But this is nice. Christmasy and...well, this could be quite the romantic gesture for a gentleman looking for something of the sort." Romantic, even with the eccentric little driver packing half the sleigh with cargo.

"That's me, persistently endeavoring for gentlemanhood."

Inara wrapped her hands around the warm container. He’d thought of everything, she realized. She was impressed.

"I - this was a nice idea, the cocoa. I wonder if it’s a local specialty?" Inara winced inwardly as she heard the question she’d just asked. A romantic sleigh ride with the man she’d been in love with for more than a year, and she was speculating on the local cocoa culture?

"Could be, folks in cold climates generally are partial to...cocoa. Because i

Comments
Tuesday, 23 December 2008 13:07
Sigh. With a fic like this, you could even get ME to love winter, and cold, and snow, and we're currently in the middle of an ice storm! Beautifully done and extremely romantic and a real heartmelter. Thanks so much for sharing!
Tuesday, 23 December 2008 17:22
AWW, this fic adequately provides a glimpse into how sweet these two will be once their pretenses and prejudices are stripped away. Thanks for sharing; it's making my frantic pre Christmas days brighter.
WOONSOCKET
Tuesday, 23 December 2008 17:40
AWWWW, so sweet.
Wednesday, 24 December 2008 16:22
omg, so great! Can't wait for more!
Friday, 26 December 2008 13:28
I ADORE this story!! It's so cute... everyone knows Mal is a romantic at heart and Inara loves him more because of that =) Pls post the next part soon...*does Kaylee face* Pleeeaaase??

Keep flying ;)
Sunday, 28 December 2008 01:43
Just had a chance to sit down and read your wonderful fic. Snow, cocoa, Mal and Inara, a wonderful combination.
Saturday, 03 January 2009 22:56
Absolutely beautiful, brilliant piece of romancing. The pace just right to build it up without scaring either of them off and I like that they are now openly acknowledging by their action if not words how they really feel. This was the icing on my Christmas cake. Ali D :~)
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