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Black Days: Jayne (6/7)

Sunday, October 5, 2008

Jayne and Simon converse. Jayne accompanies Mal and Zoe to a potential job.

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Title: Black Days: Jayne (6/7)

Author: CharlieBZ

Summary: Jayne accompanies Mal and Zoe to a potential job.

Rating: PG for language

Characters: Jayne, Crew

Pairing: Canon, if any

Spoilers/Timeline: post BDM

Disclaimer: No money is being made from by me and I certainly don’t own Firefly/Serenity.

Author's Note: This fic takes is part of a continuing series. If you’re a little lost see my blog entry Many thanks to gilliebeans at LiveJournal for all her help.

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Black Days: Jayne

Jayne looked in the mirror examining the stubble on his face. He wondered if he should shave the lower portion of his goatee and grow out an impressive mustache. Mustaches were tough, weren’t they? And they tickled women in all the right places, too. Squinting his eyes and furrowing his brow, he adopted his most lethal look and tried to imagine how thuggish he would appear with a handlebar.

Taking a couple of steps back so he could see his entire body in the mirror, Jayne quickly lost interest in the mustache question. Clad only in a pair of tight, red, and very small underpants, he grinned at his reflection. Damn, he looked good! As he flexed his arms, he marveled at how well the veins in his biceps showed. Turning to the side, he flexed again imagining he was Mr. Universe. Well, not the dead Mr. Universe, but the Mr. Universe with the body of shredded steel.

A knock sounded and he grunted loudly - it was his way of giving whoever was there knowledge that he wasn’t averse to someone entering his quarters.

“You’re due for your inoculation,” Simon called down.

Jayne rolled his eyes. “I’m busy!”

“I’m really trying to not to imagine what you’re busy doing, but, we’re due to land soon and I’m concerned about a viral strain on Three Hills. I checked your chart---“

“So come down and inoc me and stop blathering about it!”

While Jayne waited

Comments
Monday, 06 October 2008 01:04
Loved the viewpoint of this very much, from the feeling you very convincingly portrayed of economic desperation, to the feeling of family aboard ship. Lovely job of includng all the characters - and Simon in Jayne's quarters was a hoot! I felt like this was Joss's Jayne - the real thing. And of course Mal would feel the increasing desperation and react out of habit. Really loving this series and really wondering what Inara has in store.
Monday, 06 October 2008 03:57
Everything Katesfriend said and I loved the tie in with the last chapter with Zoe's hangover. I've been told that Inara is hard to write, maybe that is why she is MIA in a lot of fanfic, but you seem to know the hows and whats of her...with her bow and with Jayne, oh yes!
Monday, 06 October 2008 05:18
I think I have an idea about what Inara and Jayne are going to do...but I'll keep it to myself and see if I'm right.

And I could just see Jayne in his tighty reddies, it's so Jayne *snort*

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