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Black Days: Zoe (part 2/7)

Sunday, August 17, 2008

Zoe adjusts to her new life on Serenity. The lack of job situations is affecting the crew.

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Title: Black Days: Zoe

Author: CharlieBZ

Summary: Zoe adjusts to her new life on Serenity.

Rating: PG for language

Characters: Crew

Pairing: Canon, if any

Spoilers/Timeline: post BDM

Disclaimer: No money is being made from by me and I certainly don’t own Firefly/Serenity.

Author's Note: This fic takes is part of a continuing series. If you’re a little lost see my blog entry Many thanks to gilliebeans at LiveJournal for all her help.

Also: Serenity specs taken from the QMX Serenity Blueprint Reference Guide. I know Joss said something about no showers on Serenity but I cannot accept this. Totally ruins the fantasy if I’m imagining them all dirty and smelly. Jayne is the only one allowed to be dirty and smelly.

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Black Days: Zoe

Zoë fell to the floor her hands braced flat on the hard metal. One, two, three…She kept her eyes focused on a point on the cold floor as her mind concentrated on her technique; spine straight, inhale down, exhale up, abs contracted, keep the body in perfect alignment. Her moves were quick but precise. Twenty-seven, twenty-eight…

"I could be the floor, you know," he said lazily, watching her morning routine with great interest from the comfort of their bed. "You with the pushups, me with…being the floor." He slid off the bed as he spoke. "Get it?"

"How 'bout you joinin' in?” She asked with a pretend stern look. “Little exercise wouldn't kill you."

"We went over that, honey. I will exercise only if we can both do it naked. Exercise that is." He looked at the ceiling pondering something she knew he would be sharing soon. Man rarely had a thought that didn't make it out his mouth. "Naked jumping jacks would be interesting."

The thought of naked jumping jacks almost had her lose her count. She shot him a quick grin whi

Comments
Sunday, 17 August 2008 21:41
Very emotionally and beautifully put together. Poor Zoe, lucky she is surrounded by good people who care for her, even when they are bickering. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 18 August 2008 11:47
I agree with Amdobell, very much like Zoe. I didn't understand the tension between Jayne and Mal, though.
Monday, 18 August 2008 17:08
I'm amazed how you are able to impart this much emotion in a narrative, fabulous work!

Isn't there always tension between Mal and Jayne?
BLKHERO69
Wednesday, 20 August 2008 05:04
Powerful. Zoe's grief was smartly delivered. Loving this dynamic between Mal & Jayne, a renewed struggle of alpha dominance. As much as I hate to see our Big Damn Heroes suffer, the coming angst of no work can only lead to great storytellin'...

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