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The Alliance Spins, Part 3

Friday, May 2, 2008

Mal needs coin. The Alliance Spins takes place after the battle on Mr. U's moon and the end of the BDM.

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Title: The Alliance Spins, Part 3 of 6

Author: CharlieBZ

Summary: Mal needs coin.

Rating: PG for language

Characters: Crew

Pairings: Canon, if any

Spoilers/Timeline: post battle on Mr. U’s moon but before the end of the BDM

Disclaimer: No money is being made from this by me and I certainly don’t own Firefly/Serenity.

Author's Note: This fic takes place within my FicVerse. If you’re a little lost see my blog entry

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The Alliance Spins, Part 3

Walking out of Harvey’s Shiny RepairYards , Mal paused outside the gate surprised at the sight before him. In the four years since he had left here, Marseilles New had experienced great changes. Before the war, Hera’s Xiang Kao served as the main hub for commercial trade from the Core to the border planets. The war, however, left that city in ruins. Seeing an opportunity to recoup fortunes lost in the war, several influential Persephone families pooled what resources they had left and successfully persuaded key Alliance bureaucrats of the advantage of giving Marseilles New preferential status. In the seven years since the war ended, Marseilles New saw its population quadruple as commercial trade gradually approached pre-war levels.

Such was his aversion to this city that Mal had diligently avoided the entire eastern hemisphere of Persephone in an attempt to keep his distance from it. Of course, being the enterprising crook that he was, he’d kept up with the happenings about town so he was aware that the major commercial trade routes had now been diverted here. Still, he was unprepared for the extent of MarNew’s transformation in such a short time.

Mal, Inara, and Kaylee set off on their shopping excursion. Kaylee figured it was che

Comments
Saturday, 03 May 2008 01:37
Great read! Characterizations are spot on, with interesting OCs woven into a plot.

I appreciate how you have stayed within gen fic boundaries and have avoided the temptation of favorite shippy pairings at this point in the narrative.

Can't wait for more
Saturday, 03 May 2008 05:51
I got your email, it is a nice read. I am curious where you are going to go with it. Right now it looks like the crew is about to split. But I doubt thats what you have in mind, so curious to see what you decided to do.
Saturday, 03 May 2008 09:34
you had the mal / inara dynamic nailed:) great tone to their dialog.
Saturday, 03 May 2008 14:16
Intersting storyline and lots of room to manouver your characters in here. Looking forward to more.

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