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The Guns of Yamenmiao (Prologue)

Thursday, April 17, 2008

The Old That Is Strong - Book 1, Prologue. Crippled and low on fuel, Serenity lands on an outer planet, where Kaylee and Inara have separate encounters that may lead to a solution....or the end of the line. (Takes place between 'War Stories' and 'Trash' with spoilers for WS.)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4001    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Here it is at last - my very, very first attempt at Firefly fanfic. Sincere and profuse thanks to PhyreLight for agreeing to see that it's fit for public consumption. ;)

(Note: Hover your pointer over the Chinese phrases to view the translation.)

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DISCLAIMER: God is #1, Joss is #2. (No, not that kind of #2. I mean, he's the....I mean....aw, gorrammit.)

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Prologue

There was a chance that casual bystanders might have taken more than a passing interest in the Firefly-class light transport touching down in the spaceport of Janus City on Roma, but the chance was so remote that it might have been out near Whitefall. And with no trace of a doubt, that was just as well to the nine low-lying personnel manning the small spacecraft.

Serenity was in rough shape. While that might hardly be news to the crew of many a fifty-year-old Firefly, 'rough shape' for Serenity meant some kind of fortune in the extreme to get it off the ground again. Not a day earlier the ship had been caught with an abnormal list to port, which revealed that one of the attitude thrusters on the starboard side was out of commission. There was no call to speak the crew's dread of a rough ride and dwindling fuel reserves. Some lip-biting would be confessed following the final approach to Roma, in the uncertainty that flight control and fuel would last long enough for re-entry and landing.

Staring unblinkingly toward the small airlock windows, Malcolm Reynolds gratefully allowed his lungs to deflate when the burn-through gave way to the clear skies of planetside. Looks like Lady Luck can't make up her mind about us, he thought dryly to himself as he returned his attention to the interior of the cargo bay. Other thoughts of dry humour crossed his mind, but passed from it almost stillborn: he was all too aware that the responsibility was his in more ways than one. Kaylee Frye ha

Comments
Thursday, 17 April 2008 16:52
Well, you got my attention!
More please!
Thursday, 17 April 2008 17:02
Well, FINE! I'll read it here! LOL! ;)
Thursday, 17 April 2008 19:15
Very nice. Patricularly enjoyed the dialogue between Inara and Mal.
Friday, 18 April 2008 06:33
Yeah, the M/I banter was fantastic.
Saturday, 19 April 2008 09:33
good to see you back in action!:)
Wednesday, 23 April 2008 17:07
Ok,I'm hooked. It reads like an episode.
Saturday, 10 May 2008 05:04
OK, I had read it, but never commented. I love this series and its writer is pretty cool, too. ;)
2X2
Monday, 19 May 2008 13:58
Certainly a promising beginning! Really well done, and now I must continue on to part one!
Wednesday, 18 June 2008 11:17
Typical, they find a planet that is not Alliance friendly to land on with the hope of getting some much needed work to raise coin to fix the ship and no sooner do they land than three coachroaches lie in wait to heap more doom and gloom on them. The only good thing is they won't be able to take the ship because she can't fly. Really excellent start for a first fic, mighty impressed. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

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