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The Alliance Spins, Part 2

Wednesday, March 19, 2008

Serenity lands on Persephone for repairs. Takes place post Mr. U moon but before the end of the BDM.

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Title: The Alliance Spins, Part 2

Author: CharlieBZ

Summary: Serenity lands on Persephone for repairs.

Rating: PG for language

Characters: Crew

Pairing: Canon, if any

Spoilers/Timeline: post BDM

Disclaimer: No money is being made from by me and I certainly don’t own Firefly/Serenity.

Author's Note: This fic takes place within my FicVerse. If you’re a little lost see my blog entry

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The Alliance Spins, Part 2

“Reynolds!”

Sitting in Wash’s seat staring out the cockpit window, Mal didn’t look up. He couldn’t bring himself to respond to the increasingly persistent shouting of his name but he heard it alright. “Reynolds! Reeyyynolllldddsss!” No, Mal couldn’t look away from the black; his eyes focused on the deep, blank expanse in front of him tuning out the sounds around him. Someone was calling him to let him know that Serenity was close to Persephone which meant it was time to face the reality of their situation. Broken ship. Little money. No pilot…

“Captain O’Riley’s calling you,” River said, rousing him from his musings.

Surprised to hear her, Mal started; he had forgotten she was sitting on the bridge with him. Rubbing his hands over his eyes he spared a last glance at the window.

“Can’t the man use a com like everyone else,” Mal muttered getting up.

Not meeting River’s gaze, he headed down the steps and walked through the corridor. Turning left, he walked to the overhead airlock and looked up to see O’Riley’s smiling face peering down from the Magdalena. In his continual efforts to avoid his crew, Mal had spent some time aboard the Magdalena talking shop with Baba. The first couple of days Mal told himself he was there to ensure that O’Riley and his bunch didn’t have nefarious intentions. Serenity was vulnerable being

Comments
Wednesday, 19 March 2008 05:31
Good job; you get my first ten rating if only for the fact that you named a character Baba O'Riley. Who fan, eh?
Wednesday, 19 March 2008 05:33
Er, sorry that sounds a little bad. I liked the story (and you're verse) a lot. I'm just giving extra props for the Who reference.
Wednesday, 19 March 2008 07:31
I'm really enjoying this, I already like the O'Rileys but Zoe's worring me a bit - it's not like her to cut loose like this. You write Kaylee and Inara also very well, do we get to see Inara doing business along with Mal? Hope to see the next part soon!

Keep flying ;)
Wednesday, 19 March 2008 16:38
I see I'm not the only one who got the Who reference. Great chapter. You write everyone well, but especially Zoe and Inara.

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