Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Hard Times - Part Eleven

Wednesday, March 5, 2008

On the way to Athens, River’s insights make Leon uncomfortable but he gets a reminder of his promise to Jake. Our BDHs reach their job and meet Jing Mei’s customer, who is somewhat lacking in social niceties… Oh yeah. This is gonna go great.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2425    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer thingy: Firefly/Serenity are owned by other folks and not by me, though I appreciate being able to write some stuff purely for fun inspired by the Firefly 'Verse. All constructive comments and feedback from you shiny readers out there much appreciated!

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Leon awoke with a start: his eyes blinked against light, his hand rising to shield his face. For a few seconds he was gripped with dread, catching his breath hard. His muscles tensed and he struggled up onto his elbows, staring around the room. The unthreatening walls of the cabin looked back at him. Slowly his memory caught up with him in the here and now: Not in prison any more. On board that ship. He let out an unsteady breath and pushed himself into a sitting position on the bed, blinking in the light. Guay. Slept in my clothes. He slowly swung his legs over the edge of the bed and rested his feet on the floor: rubbed a hand over his face. Then he looked across the room, to where a stainless steel washbasin was let into the wall. Get it together. Face the day.

He stripped off the borrowed shirt and t-shirt, wincing as he moved his left arm. The sharp pain had almost gone, but lifting his shoulder to shuck off the clothes started a throbbing that made him stop and lean on the washbasin, pressing his lips together. The pain gradually eased away, leaving him shaky and clammy-faced. He ran water into the basin and washed the sweat away, sluicing his head and body until he felt fully awake.

Dried and back in the clothes he’d shaken the worst of the creases out of, he hesitantly opened his cabin door, to look out onto an empty corridor. It was quiet apart from the steady hum of the ship’s engines. Slowly Leon stepped down the corridor, retracing the route he’d taken the night before. He came out into the common area outside the infirmary and stopped: River was sitting curled up in one of the armchairs. Her eyes rested on him in the doorway a

Comments
Thursday, 06 March 2008 01:46
Did you just drop a rock on Mal's head? This surely is going to get interesting fast. Hope River knows what she's doing not letting the others know what could happen. Shore leave was so not a good idea but does wonders for plot continuity. Looking forward to more.
Thursday, 06 March 2008 05:56
Again, the conversation between Zoe and Mal was brilliant, and her observations of his body language during the stand off, was brilliant.

Shore leave, not so good...and Mal getting hit on the head, didn't see that coming.

Please continue
Thursday, 06 March 2008 11:09
Thanks, Katesfriend and Platonist - glad you're still enjoying the ride! It's so great to have feedback, I really appreciate it. (Thanks to Nutluck as well, I got your message.) Thanks for the praise for the Zoe/Mal interactions - their relationship really fascinates me. If you want to discover who dropped what on Mal's head, the next chapter will hopefully be posted up today, as I'm on a roll with this... :o)

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