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Hard Times - Part Ten

Thursday, February 28, 2008

Mal fills in everyone on the latest developments with Serenity’s stowaway: Jayne isn’t happy, and River has an insight into Leon’s recent past. Meantime, Leon gets some new clothes and an invite to join the crew for dinner. More talk than action in this slice of story... but hope folks enjoy it anyway.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2562    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer thingy: Firefly/Serenity are owned by other folks and not by me, though I appreciate being able to write some stuff purely for fun inspired by the Firefly 'Verse. All constructive comments and feedback from you shiny readers out there much appreciated!

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Serenity was cruising along on autopilot, following her pre-set course to Athens; so Mal was not surprised when he found Zoë absent from the bridge. The galley was also empty. Pausing for a moment in thought, he backtracked up the fore deck and stopped outside the door of Zoë’s cabin. He looked at the cabin door, frowning. Formerly Kaylee’s room, the door had once borne a cheerful sign decorated with Kaylee’s name and flowers. Once Zoë had moved out of her and Wash’s old cabin, freeing it up for Kaylee and Simon, she had settled into Kaylee’s bunk quietly and with typical lack of ceremony.

Mal lifted a hand and knocked on the metal. “Zoë? You down there?” There was a pause then the door opened, Zoë standing at the foot of the ladder beneath. “Anything wrong, sir?”

“Nothin’ wrong,” answered Mal. “Got a minute?” Zoë nodded, and stepped back from the ladder. Mal climbed down, pushing the cabin door shut behind him. Zoë moved back and sat down on her bunk, her eyes steady on him. Mal took the chair beside him, his eyes moving briefly across the room. There was a quiet orderliness that he recognized, an absence of clutter that was calming but also spartan. His eye caught on one thing, hanging on the wall beside the bed: a capture of Wash at the helm of Serenity, smiling over his shoulder into the lens. It was clear from the look on his face that the person taking the picture had been Zoë herself.

“Sir?” Zoë’s query brought Mal’s gaze back to her. “What was it you wanted to speak about?”

“Uh…” Mal got his thoughts back into the room. “Need to fill you in on our non-paying passenger. I had some words with him this morning, to find out just how exactly his path

Comments
Thursday, 28 February 2008 14:36
very nice chapter. normally I don't care for OC's but so far I like Leon.
Friday, 29 February 2008 02:31
Leon is rapidly endearing himself to most of the crew and your readers. I think unlike most OC stories, you are including so much of the BDH's that you're not allowing your OC to steal the show. Nice! Looking forward to where they're heading next.
Friday, 29 February 2008 04:04
Your crew interactions are spot on, and I liked reading how Mal finally attempts to knock on Inara's shuttle door, instead of barging in, and she can't hear it because of the tea party noise.

Nice work on Leon and his analysis of the crew.
Friday, 29 February 2008 15:08
caught up on this now:) still great:)

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