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Unfinished Business -- Chapter Twenty-One

Monday, January 21, 2008

What was lost is found again! The re-post of Chapter Twenty-One!

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Unfinished Business

Chapter Twenty One

“There is an inspector coming,” Colonel Chen said, his Alliance boots making a distinctive clang as he paced slowly but purposefully in front of the Browncoats he had ordered assembled as ordered in the Gymnasium. Colonel McNab, as was his want, stood in the middle of them, at the front in a visible position of leadership, while the Colonel paced. Some tried to hold to a semblance of a formation, but there were just too many for the space, and a few hundred clung to the sides of the ancient, rust-stained walls like human residue.

It bore little resemblance to a real gym, of course. It was merely an unfinished cargo container, once used to move atmo plants to the Rim. It had been gutted of everything but a floor during the retrofit that had converted the Suri Madron. It was just large enough to play football in, if you weren’t too picky about field size regulations, and you could run around and do calisthenics to your heart’s content. Some of the Chinese played catch in their spare time, and there were classes in Tai Chi and yoga every couple of days. They’d even had a cricket game going for a while before the makeshift bat was confiscated as a “weapon”.

But while it lacked typical recreational amenities, it was also the only place large enough to assemble any large number of prisoners. When the call went out over the intercom to do so, anyone who wasn’t on a work assignment was required to drop what they were doing, and right now that put nearly twelve hundred people in the place. All of them nervously watched as Colonel Chen – flanked by two squads of heavily armed Alliance guards – addressed them.

“There is an inspector coming,” the purple-uniformed man repeated, more loudly. “An Alliance inspector. Needless to say, we want to make a good impression on him. To that effect, work crews will pull double shifts until every spot of rust is shiny.” There was the expected chorus of groans – no one in any military anywhere liked preparing for an inspec

Comments
Monday, 21 January 2008 16:21
Sorry for the delay -- just put my hands on the back-up copy! Chapter 22 in February, and more soon thereafter! Thanks for all of the encouraging notes!

ScrewtheAlliance
Monday, 21 January 2008 18:33
Glad to see you back. Hope to see more new chapters up soon.
Tuesday, 22 January 2008 02:23
Yeah, and here I thought we would never get a conclusion on this epic story.
Welcome back
Tuesday, 22 January 2008 04:03
Can't wait to see what happens to this story.

Welcome back.
EPM0001
Wednesday, 23 January 2008 21:56
I've been wondering where you were. I'm glad to hear we will be getting more!
Sunday, 27 January 2008 08:36
I am glad to see this story again. I loved it from Kaylee's Lament and hoped that it would continue. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Sunday, 27 January 2008 18:49
It's mighty grand to have you back ^^!
FIREFLYCRACKHEAD
Friday, 01 February 2008 04:18
Just finished reading everything again from Kaylee's Lament (I had to reacquaint myself with this verse once i found out Screw was back). I love picking up stuff that I missed the first time. Like the fact that the girl from the Belladonna house who could've "helped" Kaylee out was named WILLOW. Love little easter eggs like that. So glad updates are on the way. Also, please feel free to plug the work that's kept you so busy. You know you have plenty of fans here!
FIRECAT5150
Friday, 01 February 2008 04:46
Screw's back!! Now we can have ourselves a proper shindig!
MISAIM
Wednesday, 13 February 2008 21:55
Hmm, I just now noticed how happy Marcus was, citing proof that the Browncoats are still fighting as inspiration.

...ouch ;)

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