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Underground - Chapter 5

Saturday, June 16, 2007

Crazy Girl attempts a big damn rescue, but things become more complicated than even she suspects.

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Summery – Crazy Girl attempts a big damn rescue, but things become more complicated than even she suspects.

Disclaimer – They all belong to Joss, I just enjoy hanging out in their midst.

Pairings - Its all fairly cannon. There’s some OC’s to mix it up a bit.

Setting – During the series, in between Trash and Heart of Gold

This story is a hundred times better because of all the wonderful betatype advice given to me by Mal4prez. I throw many thankyous in her direction.

My story line indicates nine segments: prologue, chapters 1-7 and an epilogue. I have included more about the storyline and my motivation for writing in my blog.

If you haven’t read the beginning, I’d suggest starting at the

Your comments (good or bad) really do make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, and I find I miss them when they are not around. So let me know: Love it? Hate it? Want more? Think there’ll be a happy ending? Or not? Why?

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Underground Chapter 5

“Don’t talk; the walls have ears.”

Kaylee turned toward the sound but didn’t see anything. Not that she would really be able to in the cramped, dark tunnel those monsters had her caged in. The rough stone ceiling was about five feet above her head; the walls were half again as wide. It was enough room for her to move around, but not easily. In the time since she had awakened, she had explored as much of the area as the ten foot chain attached to her ankle would allow. There wasn’t much to find, just darkness in either direction. The light bulb hanging above her head was the only light.

Her explorations of the tunnel had taken just a few short minutes, after which she had sat down and had a good cry. Even if she could somehow escape the shackle around her ankle, there was no place to go, just endless tunnels of black. And she knew better that to go walking underground in the dark.

Kaylee had only been eight when she had heard the story of the Emerson child

Comments
Sunday, 17 June 2007 08:17
Ooh, this is all coming together very nicely. My only worry is Ashti opening her mouth to Vetch, him then making a poor excuse to hurry off does not bode well for our heroes. I'm thinking Vetch is off to warn the slavers. At least that is my suspicion. Loved Jayne immediately offering help to Carli after she has been beaten up and cut on. And I adored 'sneaky' River, so very in character for her. Can't wait to see what happens next! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 17 June 2007 22:58
I'm still very much enjoying this. Keep up the good work:)
Thursday, 21 June 2007 02:18
Utterly fabulous work here, Dersertgirl! Definitely was all kinds impresed with the Jayne-Mira scene...that and the Kaylee-River conversation while Kaylee was trying to fix the drilling machine;D

BEB

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