Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Underground - Chapter 2

Friday, June 8, 2007

In which Book gets a tip on a job, River discovers some information the others really should know, Jayne finds something he wants, and Simon puts his foot in his mouth.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2689    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Summery – Book gets a tip on a job, River discovers some information the others really should know, Jayne finds something he wants, and Simon puts his foot in his mouth.Disclaimer – They all belong to Joss, I just enjoy hanging out in their midst.

Pairings - all the traditional M/I; K/S; Z/W; Jayne/Anyone in a skirt; River’s in everyone’s minds and Book is trying to keep them all straight, plus throw in a few OC’s for good measure. In other words its all fairly cannon.

Setting – During the series, in between Trash and Heart of Gold

This story is a hundred times better because of all the wonderful betatype advice given to me by Mal4prez. I throw many thankyous in her direction.

My story line indicates 9 segments, prologue chapters 1-7 and an epilogue. I have included more about the storyline and my motivation for writing in my blog.

If you haven’t read the beginning, I recommend starting at the

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Underground Chapter 2

Shepherd Book walked up to the old farmhouse with River just as the sun was setting in the clear western sky. Behind the house, fields stretched out for several miles, upon which a hundred fine horses grazed lazily. The rolling fields ended in the steep incline of a mountain range. The white farm house was situated at the edge of town, at the end of a narrow lane. It looked big for a vicarage. Perhaps Wormfood had found himself wealthy. It was obviously the home of his old friend though. On the lot next door, instead of a house was an exceptionally well kept garden and behind that a small orchard. Book could not help thinking how much Kaylee would enjoy seeing this garden. She would enjoy even more grazing in that orchard. Book smiled to himself.

“Thou shalt not take what does not belong to you,” River’s voice descended on the Shepherd. “Garden’s bounty would have to be shared or it’s poison. Steal the forbidden fruit and you are cast out. Says so in your book. ‘Sides nothings ripe

Comments
Friday, 08 June 2007 09:59
Loved this and somehow I don't see Mal wanting to just stop at smuggling one or two slaves out on his ship. I'm thinking they need to take back that gorram mine for the rightful owner. I loved Jayne's comment right at the end. Poor Simon, he tries so hard to do right he can't stop tripping over his feet. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 08 June 2007 13:29
Arrrg! It ate my comment! You'd think I'd know to save a copy before clicking the button...

Anyway, you do so well at coming up with those bizarre yet fitting River lines. They make me smile the second time reading too: "...allowing people to create a field of relevance around the events in their lives" LOL!

What's more, in this fic you manage to work in all the BDH's, and create OC's that are refreshing and interesting, and put them in an enjoyable setting. (Sorla's house makes me want to go home and play in my garden!) You have so much going on here; I know it's taken a lot of work, but it's worth it!

Kudos desertgirl!
Friday, 08 June 2007 18:49
Hmm...just hope Book can have a chat with Mal ASAP about their related missions. Certainly would help things along if Katra didn't have to boogie off planet...less she wants to run just to get the money and a new life.

And both Tams were in fine form here, desertgirl! River was at her cryptic best and Simon once again shows just how stupid propriety is sometimes:D

BEB
Tuesday, 16 October 2007 09:55
just came back and read this - slipped past me in my lurker days. i was NOT dissapointed!:) might take a while - but i'll catch up on the rest!:)

i love that you don't rush the pace.

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