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Underground - Chapter 1

Tuesday, June 5, 2007

Shore leave comes a might earlier than Mal would like. Mal just wants to relax and maybe find a nice little transport job, he doesn’t realize he might be getting in a bit over his head. And there’s the mention of some shiny yellow metal.

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Summery – Shore leave comes a might earlier than Mal would like. Mal just wants to relax and maybe find a nice little transport job, he doesn’t realize he might be getting in a bit over his head. And there’s the mention of some shiny yellow metal.

Disclaimer – They all belong to Joss, I just enjoy hanging out in their midst.

Pairings - all the traditional M/I; K/S; Z/W; Jayne/Anyone in a skirt; River’s in everyone’s minds and Book is trying to keep them all straight, plus throw in a few OC’s for good measure. In other words its all fairly cannon.

Setting – During the series, in between Trash and Heart of Gold

This story is a hundred times better because of all the wonderful betatype advice given to me by Mal4prez. I throw many thankyous in her direction.

My story line indicates nine segments, prologue, chapters 1-7 and an epilogue. I have included more about the storyline and my motivation for writing in my blog.

Here's a link to the

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Underground Chapter 1

“Wash! We’ve gotta land and evac the ship now,” Kaylee’s voice screamed through the com. This was not the type of thing Mal liked hearing from his mechanic. Laying the gun he was cleaning down on the table, he stood and headed for the engine room, but came face to face with Kaylee as she closed the engine room hatch.

“Kaylee, what’s the gorram problem?” Mal felt the ship lurch, and he leaned on the wall to keep from falling. Kaylee grabbed onto a conduit tube, almost loosing her balance as well.

“Not sure Cap. Things were hummin’ along just fine when the starboard main exhaust blew. That stuff’d kill us before we knew it if we breathed it. I turned off the atmo, and closed off the engine room, but we gotta land and air out the ship. We’re pumping that stuff into the ship as long as we’re flying.”

Mal nodded and ran towards the bridge. He felt the ship set down on the ground as he stepped over the threshold of the bridge.

Comments
Tuesday, 05 June 2007 03:34
Lots of plot twists in this one - good work!
Tuesday, 05 June 2007 09:43
I just loved Zoe and Wash hiding in the bushes while that woman put her plan to Mal. Have to say I am wary about what the woman is not telling them, this certainly can't go as smoothly as she makes it sound but gold? I'm thinking Jayne will be slavering at the mouth. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 05 June 2007 14:24
Hahaha liked the ending. I love Zoe! This is shaping up to be a shiny fic! xx
Tuesday, 05 June 2007 17:48
Lots to say about this, Desertgirl:

1) Book's first name is "Derrial" not "Darryl"

2) Only Wash would wear a garish Hawaiian shirt to a stakeout:D

3) Inara's gonna be peeved about the whole "sweethearts" cover, even if she's filled in on the plan:(

4) The plan? Starting to smell a lot like what Jayne and Stitch Hessian had planned for their job on Canton that accidentally earned Jayne his title of "Hero of Canton";)

BEB
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 03:56
Hey there – Sorry about the misspelling of Derrial. I found out about 9/10ths of the way into the writing that I had it wrong and corrected them. Apparently I missed one. It’s fixed now though. Thanks for keeping me on my toes.

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