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The Operative Series - Zoe

Saturday, April 28, 2007

The sixth and final installement in the series. The title says it all. Rated NC-17 for a few salty words.

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As always everything belongs to Joss. All of these are written in chronological order, but can be read as stand alones (only vague references to other installments). Ratings are shiny, comments are shinier!

Intro 1 –

He never told her and now he regretted it. Only because the similarities were so pronounced, so obvious. He had hinted to her that she was catlike, but never came out saying that it was a lioness that most often came to mind. It was because he had never seen a lioness except in books and the occasional film in GenEd. It was enough for him to see it in her though – she was a lioness: sleek, feline, graceful, dangerous – such an adept hunter that the prey rarely even saw her coming. But when they did it was loud, powerful and overwhelming. He couldn’t tell her now and it’d be a long time before he would be able to. Besides, when they can talk again… really talk there might be other, more important things to be said. So for now he watched her stalk the shadows, hold quiet to the corners and walls. Both of them unseen by virtually everyone, seeing virtually everything.

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Intro 2 –

It was better this way, truly it was. She was always up before everyone else, but stayed out of sight. Couldn’t take the looks on their face. They meant well of course, but well intended pity was still pity and it rankled her. If her lack of presence meant that they didn’t have to face everything head on, then it was the least she could do. And it meant that she didn’t have to face everything either. Let them deal with the Alliance hun dans, let them deal with the memory of Miranda, let them deal with Serenity and the physical wounds. It would be more than enough to distract them from Wash an’ Book being gone. For Zoe, none of that could distract her mind from circling the same thought over and over and over: “He’s gone. He’s really gone.”

Having sat through an hour of the medical attention given her by the Alliance she left. Doctors and nurses all tried to argue, convince her to stay. One steely look from

Comments
SUSANAH
Saturday, 28 April 2007 15:33
I don't cry easily but you really got to me here. This is an excellent series. Thank you so much!
DEADSLEADDAVIS
Sunday, 29 April 2007 03:12
wow, loved the series!!! so is there gonna be another one??? Cant wait to read more of youre work!
Sunday, 29 April 2007 19:31
Aaaw, Zoe being the one who dealt with Wash's body was heartbreaking. I really like the idea of her watching over the crew though - I would've thought it'd be the other way around so it's a bit bizarre but it makes alotta sense.

I really thought she was going to kill the Operative but I'm glad she didn't, for her sake. I know you said this was the final part but I wondered if there'd be some sort of concluding scene to this - with the entire crew talking to each other about what happened, perhaps?

Great series though, I loved it all! Really well written, and your Operative voice was brilliant. Wonderful work :-)
Sunday, 29 April 2007 21:58
I wasn't planning on a final scene... but the series brought up enough elements to give me a story line, bit longer and without the pattern of being "Operative dependent." Still have my last two weeks in school, so I'm not sure when I'll be posting the first chapter... but it'll happen.

Thank you for the comments... glad you enjoyed reading it!
Monday, 30 April 2007 23:30
Utterly fabulous work here, ECAmber! Much as Zoe's behaviour initially seems OOC...I can only imagine that keeping watch over the crew is the only thing that allows Zoe some modicum of sanity and comfort...

Also...I really hope you can develop a follow-up to this series, as all the clues and Operative/BDH interactions have left me personally feeling like there's a bigger tale to tell once the final scenes of the movie have occurred in this timeline;)

BEB

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