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The Operative Series - Inara

Wednesday, April 18, 2007

Third installment in the Operative Series. The title says it all.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3223    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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As always everything belongs to Joss. All of these are written in chronological order, but can be read as stand alones (only vague references to other installments). Ratings are shiny, comments are shinier!

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Intro -

Inara sighed, pulling her shaw tight around her shoulders as she stepped outside. It wasn't so much cold outside, but there always seemed to be a pervasive chill in the air no matter where she went. Breathing deep she watched the changes in the ion cloud as the sun set behind it. Like the aurora borealis from Earth That Was, the sky shimmered as the sun grew closer to the horizon. The constant humming and crackling of the atmosphere seemed to mellow into shades of greens and yellows. Once it set there would be only flickers of the constant electrical storm that never reached the surface. The night sky jarred her, but twilight comforted. Leaving the MedCen (where only proper food available was offered at virtually anytime), she headed away from the service bay where Serenity was slowly healing from her battle wounds. It only took Inara two days since arriving that she found her a secluded spot where the lights of the Alliance wouldn't interfere with her meditation and communion with the lights in the sky.

With so much to absorb and sort through she was grateful for the time afforded from being temporarily stranded. It gave her an easy excuse to ignore any one of the many unknowns that seemed to be pushing in on her from all sides. It gave her an ironic sense of freedom to have this time. Any other place in the Guild's easy reach she would have found herself surrounded by well meaning, and not so well meaning, peers either offering comfort or subtly fishing for clues of the past month. Well meaning or not, neither would have afforded her the privacy and such a sheer expanse of time to really think. And with the Miranda broadwave she was sure that in any of those numerous places in the 'verse she would have found herself in some uncomfortable scenes of reckoning. She sighed r

Comments
Wednesday, 18 April 2007 07:05
I liked this one, although there were a few tense issues that made it harder to read.

I think it's interesting that the Operative would give Mal via Inara something to help track him down at a later time. Could you be hinting at a longer story, perhaps? Now, that would be interesting ...
Wednesday, 18 April 2007 09:29
This one actually makes sense of you not doing a chapter with Mal and the Operative. After all they had that final scene together in the film. And by going to Inara he is also implying a connection between the two that is somewhat fragile in Inara's mind. She has after all been hiding her true feelings from Mal for so long and the truth scares her because of its' ability to make her exposed and vulnerable to emotions over which she has little control. I just hope the holocube is not a poison chalice in disguise but somehow I don't think so. I very much like the sound and style of the Operative, it is so very accurate. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 19 April 2007 02:40
Yay!
I'm looking forward to the next one!
Thursday, 19 April 2007 23:08
Oooh...foreshadowing perhaps? Cuz that would be all kinds of ultra-shiny, ECAmber;D

Definitely loved what you did with Inara and the Operative here, ECA. The Operative is right that Inara is the only person amongst the remaining BDHs who has the training and the ability to subjugate her emotions long enough to get a horrid task done...like hang on to a valuable piece of data from an enemy. Also, having these two figures - who, in essence, had the most growth within the movie concerning their points-of-view - have this kind of restrained verbal duel is definitely quite Whedonesque in that it provides no easy answers or solutions, but offers up the complexities of making painful decisions for the greater good;D

BEB
Sunday, 22 April 2007 21:19
Very well written chapter, and conveyed the tension between Inara and the Operative perfectly. It's interesting, because we don't generally see Inara in that state of mine, so you really just have to guess if you're writing her like that, so well done!

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