It's not cold. Not really. Wasn't warm either. Truth be told there wasn't much of anything to feel. Actually, there was nothing. No heat, no cold, no softness or hardness, no sense of gravity, no light glowing through the lids of his eyes, no wind. "What place has no wind?" he wondered. With that, he opened his eyes.
And then he remembered.
He remember the first scream. It seemed out of place for where they lived. It was always quiet there. It was never silent though; there was always the hum of the pump, the breeze which was always present in the valley. Laughter that would sometimes echo through the buildings made roughly of sheet metal and clay, through the hills made of stone, through the mine shafts that wormed their way into the belly of the moon.
The first scream though, it shook him. A level within himself, a level he never visited willingly, recognized that scream. Barely, almost unconsciously, he thought of how the others wouldn't place it's meaning immediately. But he knew - it was the sound of fear of the unknown coupled with the sound of the species desire to survive. It was the scream of a person who suddenly felt cheated out of their life. It was the scream of someone who felt betrayed by fate.
Already running he knew that his community, his new family had not even registered the gravity of the situation. He ran. His body which he kept in shape moved with the grace that never really left him. The strength he cultivated when it seemed to no longer have a purpose. And then the screams coupled with the sounds of metals screaming through the air. Metal that embedded itself in dirt, ricocheted off of rock, burrowed into flesh. Those sounds danced in the air partnered with the screams of panic.
Time slowed. It was a short distance, his legs pumping to the turret. Such a short distance, such a short amount of time... yet his mind managed to spin on so many thoughts. He thought of the danger of the shuttle, the whine of it's engine as it turned to make another attack. He recognized the soun
You can't take the sky from me
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Still...this fic was amazing in it's natural study of Book and his thoughts about returning to an older self in order to defend his newer self and his loved ones:)
BEB
As I've reread this I realize that I've had a hate/love relationship with this story. I really think it's one of my better ones (one of the best truth be told). But I HATE the implications (that yes, Book does repeat this scene as pennance). I agree, Book deserves so much better and I wish it had ended differently. But this is a story that wrote itself. In my world Book isn't even dead, or if he has to die then he's in the best of all places possible. This is one of those dark one shots where hope just isn't given to the reader. Maybe, in a way, it makes it more powerful. Anyway, glad you enjoyed reading it and thanks again for the feedback!
-I loved this line, as we all know he is a Shepherd partially because of his past sins (he used to be a BlueHand in my story).
I really like the descriptive language you used in this fic. I have never read any of your stuff before but when I get the chance I will probably go check it all out.
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